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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Nice and all but how would his father even know that those books are important for him?

    Ch 15 Death and Domain - Chapter 15
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    Harry Potter: Death and Domain
    Book&Literature · PathLiar
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  • 1yr
    Commented
    Ch 11 Devil Fruit User
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    One Piece: Gacha System
    Anime & Comics · HereAlice
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    nice chapter

    Ch 62 Liam's Worth for Crew and Crew Belief for Liam
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    Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates
    Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Missing the details, feels more like a step to step explanation but it's okay I think.

    Ch 7 An Unforgettable Night
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    One Piece: Gacha System
    Anime & Comics · HereAlice
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Feels like a parody from Harry Potter's first year.

    Ch 40 Chapter 40. Invisible Nightmare
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    The Slytherin Magus
    Book&Literature · _Ink_
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 47 V.2 Chapter 18
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    Swordsman System In Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Mathematical_Pi
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  • 1yr
    Posted

    Starts out good with new innovative ideas. Later on, author goes the usual rout with canon ... . For me the story goes downhill there, plus, with the change of the story it feels less than a One Piece story than a story about a guy with mental problems.

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    One Piece: Wild Hunt
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Story is good but kind of awkward with Danzo around and how MC behaves...

    Ch 46 V.2 Chapter 17
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    Swordsman System In Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Mathematical_Pi
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    It's easy to understand, character is quite competent it seems.

    Ch 11 Author's note
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    Naruto : Mizuki Reborn
    Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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  • 1yr
    Posted

    Story itself would be good but I can only give 1 star to story development and stability of updates. Author is revising the story all the time and deletes chapters already out. As a reader you don't know whether you have to reread or not. Better be slow with the chapters than deleting stuff already out.

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    Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi
    Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario
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  • 1yr
    Replied to TOS

    It's too see that he loses at the start but I thought he can't die to many times as it affects his vitality?

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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Nice fight

    Ch 8 Not a good day
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    Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi
    Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Thanks, nice progress.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20
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    The Will of Gil (Gilderoy Lockhart SI)
    Movies · DragonField
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Liked it more before the edit but...

    Ch 6 The anger
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    Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi
    Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Hopefully he isn't that "special" that there is only one black crystal.

    Ch 6 The anger
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    Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi
    Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario
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  • 1yr
    Posted

    Build up of the story is good but I sometimes miss the detail. Like he has some abilities but the story doesn't really show when he got them. In the last few chapter the story is a bit too much focused on "every woman likes him".

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    Naruto: Cool Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · lbj_169
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Thanks nice work

    Ch 4 Ch.4 - The Train of Fated Encounters
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    Transported in Harry Potter
    Book&Literature · DefinitelyNotACat
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Thanks

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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Thanks, don't like such abilities though.

    Ch 35 Devil Fruit Abilities
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    Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates
    Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. Compared to the other good chapters it was only so-so. Felt as if the MC was under a confundus charm.

    Ch 26 Healer
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    Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)
    Movies · HelloDarkness07
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