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Zbara_15778hCommented"These Dango balls favored by Anko seem famous as the eatery was quite busy, and they definitely are worth it," he mused as he continued eating while strolling. Originally, he did not intend to shop or eat out; Mei had stuffed two hundred taels of banknotes into his pocket before he left, and she seemed concerned about letting me go alone, but after some assurances, she let me go.- Zbara_157712hCommentedAnd not just crossed over, but into the body of a mutant?
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the only reason this story is popular is because its sus it's got great technical writing, but the execution is middling, chapters filled with redundancy, sighs every 10th sentence, 5 chapters could be reduced to 2, and you wouldn't lose any concept of the story or mcs thoughts. like naruto filler. everything else is basic MHA si, but mc doesn't know much about the plot
- Zbara_15773dCommentedCh 20 Tsunade Senju
- Zbara_15775dCommentedCh 61 Gift Between Friends
- Zbara_15775dCommentedCh 36 Chapter 20: I’m Not a Businessman. I’m a Business, Man!
- Zbara_15775dCommentedChapter 20: I’m Not a Businessman. I’m a Business, Man!
- Zbara_15776dCommentedHe cursed, 'What the hell? Why does it feel like he was actually wanting a fight instead of negotiating? Even Sensei was never this overbearing! If he had an issue, he would just assassinate everyone he had an issue with, leaving no survivors or witnesses. Heck, even Danzo has never threatened an ally so openly!'
- Zbara_15779dCommentedCh 20 Evolution
- Zbara_15779dCommented
Good story Author sama, if was fun while it lasted. Until next time. adios amigo. Later alligator. Two birds one stone.
I was constantly writing since 10th of April and just need a short break to relax a bit, the story will not be dropped, don't worry. - Zbara_15779dReplied to Vidhan_Bhardwaj
nah you gotta reupload the whole thing, say what you changed so people come back
No readers are there - Zbara_157710dCommentedCh 20 Training Results Summary, Assuming the Role of the Prophet?
- Zbara_157710dCommented
Nah, honestly, Even after reading this fic from the start, I've never expected the weight of his balls to surpass the sun. Finally someone with the guts to do this in a Naruto fic
Fujin nodded and answered in the same casual tone while raising his fourth finger, "Sure, your fourth option is to lie to me and ally with Iwagakure after we leave. In that case, I'll return later and assassinate every one of you and kill every single person living in your houses." - Zbara_157712dCommentedSuddenly, his eyes widened. Hanging around Fujin and falling prey to his sudden attacks without caring whether he was ready or not had an effect on Naruto. He didn't bother waiting for Zabuza to be done with his speech. At the same time, Naruto and each of his Shadow Clones launched several kunai. Each of the kunai had an explosive tag attached to them!
- Zbara_157712dCommented[A/N: Ashikaga Hiroshi was first shown in chapter 169.]
- Zbara_157713dCommented
I feel like mc *has* to get a tyranitar at some point if big battles go like this.
Even though the attacks were defended, no one relaxed as they heard Eliza's voice once again, 'Use Rock Blast, Stone Edge, Power Gem, Ancient Power, Earth Power or other similar mid-range moves. This shall be our last attack before the Tide reaches us and we enter into a melee.' - Zbara_157714dCommented
Dragon dance
Gyarados and I feasted on the sea king and partied until it got dark. I played my guitar and jammed out playing songs I knew Gyarados danced to the tunes. - Zbara_157715dCommented
lol, this is how it's supposed to be, not a 'certain' fic where reincarnated goes insane because he lost an academy fight.
Yuta don't really mind losing the fight or enduring some pain because of it. What he don't like about those fights is that he don't learn anything from it. - Zbara_157715dCommented
well, for low level stuff like explsion tags, regular programing logic applies, or things that don't need encryption
'Well, fuinjutsu art is no joke from what it seems. It's works in a way just like the normal programming, but in this world it's important to make the seals in a complex and intricate way, instead of normal programming where the most important thing is that the program is written in the clear and understandable way, so other programmers will easily understand it in a glance.'