Comments of chapter undefined of MARVEL: RE-DO
MARVEL: RE-DO
Draul_TheOminous
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Does he not know the statement that too much of something is sometimes bad, then it can also be used to argue that too much exploration in the minds of young people in their rebellious phase is bad because the consequences of their desicions may affect others or themselves severly that it may ruin something important.
I think other people are just upset at being called out for achieving their dreams of nothing it seems like fanfic's main audience are typically depressed people that are looking for escapism. XD an Interesting first chapter very different than most. I was expecting him to just down some pills and take a swig of booze before laying on the couch though considering his comments on moving on to the next chapter of life.
To be honest, this rambling of a chapter was too subjective. Perhaps it tried to aim objectively as how it groups the people but nevertheless it stayed subjective still. Despite that, I still enjoyed it. Probably because it's pretty interesting to know how other people think, and probably that's what the Author was pondering about at the time. Readers who only read for "entertainment" doesn't mean that authors couldn't make something out of the box or quality content. They don't have to cater to you cause fanfiction authors aren't payed any penny. So, to those who called this boring(to many people), and useless(you're dumb), shame on you. Cause this chapter has obviously been under a lot of thought and it's a peek on the character's mindset and thought process. Which would lead you to know if you would like to proceed with the book or not. For me, I liked it and I would obviously read this. Thank you author, let me appreciate the efforts you did that others didn't appreciate.
I had an idea. Are you familiar with Hikigaya Hachiman and the anime Oregairu? You should keep the first philosophical part but add quotation marks at start and end and make it so that it was written by a student. And the protagonist is actually a teacher reading the essay. He scolds the student and tells him to write a proper essay instead of philosophical ramblings and then after the student goes away and he is left alone. He is forced to contemplate his own life and dreams being effected by the essay. Then you can keep the second part same. Just an idea but I thought it would make the chapter more interesting.
