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Supreme_Leader1dReplied to galksI'm not advocating for it to happen but I'm just pointing out that in a comic world where almost everyone is perfect looking. Many people are attracted to Catwoman because of the Femme Fatale characteristic she has. Which she probably developed after her many run ins with crime and other experiences. But without that development she would not have the same personality. Unless the author decided to give her the same personality despite her growing up differently then that's just bad writing.
To become the Catwoman, she needed to be an orphan, she needed to be poor and suffer...- Supreme_Leader4dCommented
David Fincher is pure skill and hardwork. He started out working as assistants on film sets and then later got into directing commercials. hge made connectiions by working on film sets and showcased his skills via commericials. Only then did he started directing films. except for Alien which the producers interfered with, the rest of works, both films and television are great works that can stand the test of time. heck Netflix became what it is now because of Fincher and house of cards. not to mention Mindhunter, which I regret watching because there isnt any hope of getting a new season. If I somehow went back in time than one of the things I would do is give Fincher unlimited budget to continue the series.
'I'm not stupid. I have lived long enough to understand the difference between the two of us. It's about luck and opportunity. I never had any of that in my life.' - Supreme_Leader4dReplied to MrCurator
what rule?
'David Fincher is going to be famous. "Fight Club" is a masterpiece in my opinion.' - Supreme_Leader4dCommented
David had a bad time directing the movie and disowned it. I doubt he would care about it being praised.
David smiled. He appreciated Kazir's praise, even if it was a lie. It was enough that someone recognized him. - Supreme_Leader4dCommented
This feels more like an explanation to the reader rather than something the character would naturally. Our thoughts are usually fragmented and incomplete rather than fully formed grammatically correct sentences.
'Cassandra didn't fight to get my bumpy car because it's already old and she has her own car.' - Supreme_Leader4dCommented
The way its worded the dialouge feels unnatural.
"Cassandra, I just want to say that you are a big fucking whore. While I'm working hard to give you everything you need and want, you cheated on me with a rich guy and lost my trust. And now you want half of my money? What a fucking bitch you are." - Supreme_Leader5dCommentedThe younglings training nearby cast curious glances in his direction, and Peter couldn't shake the feeling that all eyes were on him as he realized. 'I'm probably going to be forced to live with these kids from now on…'
- Supreme_Leader5dCommented
That's force penetrating him deeply
Unbeknownst to Peter, as he delved deeper into his meditation, the Force responded in kind. His connection grew stronger, and he began to float and hover a few inches above the med-bay bed. It was an unintentional manifestation of his newfound abilities, a testament to the potency of the Force coursing through him. - Supreme_Leader5dCommented
Easy peasy
Anticipating that results might take time, he was surprised when, after only a minute, he felt it. The Force was all around him and within him, like an unseen ocean he hadn't known he was swimming in until now. The revelation brought a genuine smile to Peter's face, he was indeed Force sensitive. - Supreme_Leader5dReplied to DisastrousPride
Being a Jedi would be boring. I'd rather be a force user with no affiliation to either Jedi or Sith.
It wasn't a hard decision to come to. After all, his mother was gone, his father is a psychopathic god, and here he was, a child with two lives worth of knowledge and experience, in an unfamiliar galaxy. - Supreme_Leader5dCommented
Sith are just better.
After a thoughtful pause, Peter spoke. "I'm willing to become a Jedi, if they'll have me." - Supreme_Leader5dCommented
Darth Plague.
[Insert picture of Darth Plagueis here] - Supreme_Leader12dReplied to Deadrule_vivek
I don't care how Scott is being portrayed here. Regardless of good, evil, or incompetent. What I have a problem is with the character being so one dimensional that it feels cheap to read. I don't need deep characterization for every character but atleast there should be some nuance. But the portrayal of Scott is very cartoonish.
His thoughts most of the time revolved around getting me into his bed & breeding me. He was despicable. - Supreme_Leader25dReplied to BLatman
There is natural rubber extracted from Rubber Trees in the form of latex that can used to make them. It is not necessary to dig for oil.
In a world where whores and alcohol rule, you need to capitalize on one of the two, and because I find the idea of being a Pimp disgusting, I decided to capitalize on the other option. - Supreme_Leader1mthReplied to Chaossin
exactly. Even MTls do a far better job than this.
Noland Lee turns to look back, and his heart lightens. He realized that he has unknowingly retreated to the Tomb Ground-level Area. - Supreme_Leader1mthCommented
The Translator should have used the Deconstruction system on this novel to translate it cause the current translation is bad. Webnovel should really quality check their works cause Webnovel as a platform is bringing down the quality of all the translated works all by itself.
Its correct use should be for research, cracking, translation, scientific examinations and so forth. - Supreme_Leader1mthCommented
*longed
Noland Lee feels his body growing cold, his will fading, and he longs to gulp down water—this is a delusion caused by severe blood loss, signifying that death is nearing. - Supreme_Leader1mthCommented
*felt. Even MTLs get these type of things right. As a matter of fact, I just took a look at the MTL for this chapter and everything was in the correct tense. MTLs get the tenses right and only have problems with sentence structure and translating names and words that dont have direct english translations. I suggest the current translator use MTL as the base and improve upon it. cause wrong tenses tend to break immersion more than other grammatical errors.
Noland Lee feels his body growing cold, his will fading, and he longs to gulp down water—this is a delusion caused by severe blood loss, signifying that death is nearing. - Supreme_Leader1mthCommented
*Just like blood seeping from
Time flows away, second by second, just like blood seeps from Noland Lee's body, drop by drop. - Supreme_Leader1mthCommented
*Time flew by
Time flows away, second by second, just like blood seeps from Noland Lee's body, drop by drop.