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StressOwl4mthReplied to ALEX1402Ch 64 Middle- StressOwl5mthReplied to Rella_foxypro_270
that's the point. he's keeping it vague on purpose so you can project.
Inmo appeared divine, dressed in white and gold robes, a radiant crown hovering above his head, never touching his black hair. His hair seemed to absorb all the light around him, like a black hole, creating a strange effect of incongruity – a being of divine light shrouded in darkness, a being that inspired fear and respect. - StressOwl6mthPosted
a clumsy mashup of every "cool" anime the author has seen, randomly throwing in new powers that don't need to be from other anime but are because giving the reader extra homework to do is cooler i guess.The setting the MC is in can easily explain the in-universe whatever power the author wants to give him, but he insists on geek-gasming about every other show he's seen too.Unfocused, inconsistant wishfulfillment with no plot.
- StressOwl6mthCommentedCh 1 The Great Underground Tomb Of Nazarick!
- StressOwl6mthCommentedCh 24 Chapter 23
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she's a kid
The girl was very pretty. She had rather long eyelashes for someone so young, with a dainty little nose, thin lips, and a somewhat pointed jawline. Her skin was porcelain white, and her features combined to give her the look of a startled rabbit, in addition to a sense of unspeakable beauty. - StressOwl6mthCommentedCh 54 Night
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i don't think white people get offended by being called white. Most white people don't even get mad at being called cracker. probably should, but don't.
"... Uh, yes?" Yuki responded to the white person in front of him. (AN: Just In case, that's not a racist word. What in front of him was a literal white person.) - StressOwl6mthReplied to cruelsanto
japan is very conservative. you can tell by their use of "moral culture".It usually means "anything I don't personally like is bad and therefore illegal."
Violators would be publicly listed on the game's official website, and their accounts would be deleted, or worse. Once the records of these R-18 actions were publicly released, they might be punished for damaging moral culture and thus violating the Social Order Maintenance Act. As such, most people would consider these acts off-limits. - StressOwl6mthCommented
giving him too many templates is going to get annoying for the reader to remember. it might be better to give him in-universe boons like battle aura, stronger magics, magic resistance, or something similar.i understand that you like multiple shows, but you don't need to shove all of them into one fanfic.
Ch 10 Chapter 10 - StressOwl6mthCommented
you could just say the powers. i don't like having to do research when reading a fanfiction.
1. Suck her breasts to your heart's contents. Reward: Makoto Misumi abilities. - StressOwl6mthCommented
cousin and mother is completely different.
'So, if I feel attractiveness towards my mother it is considered normal as cousin incest is allowed in this world.' - StressOwl6mthCommented
very mature. just don't react to them.
[ You: Yeah, I just did your Mom last night. ] - StressOwl6mthCommented
just say shadow person, it's more clear.
In far front of him, there's a black person standing still and straight. Its looks are completely black, not just normal black but pitched black, whole over its body. You can't see any part of him that isn't covered with black. It also has no features. - StressOwl6mthCommentedCh 26 Update
- StressOwl7mthReplied to LordOrpheus
got it
'That must be it. It's the overuse of my powers... that is why I'm aging like a white person...'