Comments of chapter undefined of Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!

You can't really escape the possible plot hole with this kind of story. But I think the way you executed your story is top-tier. For me, the romance is well balanced. (So forget the harem). A little thing that I don't like is the modern tech.

Honestly I wish you would include more reaction chapters to the anime like the ones you did for attack on titan.

There's several loose end that needed to be tied, and being in a hurry over the harem isn't a good thing. Take your time and develop the story more, well... In a way, your story already had a solid ground so, it's good to make more foundation for the future chapters

dearest author, I just want to know how you plan to introduce luffy's mother. i like your idea for the novel and so far, i just feel incomplete with only a chapter a day but I can bear with it as long as you don't drop it 😁

The fic is good, the only problem for me is how skipping over some arcs of the animes that are introduced, like Yorknew of Hxh, but that fic is only focused on One Piece so I can see why are you skipping.

I feel like you are stretching the story but since ur updating daily I have no problem with that. And the reactions of the important characters seems not enough. This is my opinion though I dunno about others. Also I want the MC to demonstrate his true strength sometimes so that no one's gonna bother him. The marines and WG still seems to see him as a prey which I don't like.

Honestly I am not very attentive to plot holes since basically I only focus on the story entertaining me, but I do see that other characters' reactions to various events are missing and what I most hope is to see how the pirate world will react to the story by Brook and Laboon with amazing "Binks no Sake"

1. Did we miss something about the Gran Tesoro? I was wondering about the competition between the merchants or the entertainment world. 2. Then, hey, this is far from plot canon. Why not give some of the Lunarian race survivors a chance. Wouldn't it be great if Rob had a Lunarian child? After all this is a colorful multi-racial world... hahaha 3. Does Rob have a named sword? 4. Shouldn't he need to train Olvia to be strong, instead of teaching his wife to drive a car? It would be better to have a woman who knows how to fight than to maintain a weight or a vase of flowers. 5. Come on, add more students. In the future there may be a kingdom building. If he 'might' be confronted by a world government, it would be best to have a strong army. 6. Rob can consume more than 1 devil fruit. Does the same apply to Robin and Olvia?

So far I like your story, there’s some plot holes and there but the way you execute your story is good. For me went Rob want to expand more. I thinks he should some gacha game or something, or put like that of Japanese. That just my opinion don’t take this serious. Hope you rest well tomorrow and write your fanfic till you quit or die. (My English is not that great.)

Well first great story and I love the comedy from the Monkey Family. Honestly I would love to see more of that and especially moments with Sengoku

Hmmm.im not a fanfic person but i like the story. The only problem (for me) is that the pace of the story is too slow.. And Can you atleast do 2 chap./day? Its just a request.

what i don't like are situations where red cries because she feels like what she's reading is really going to happen. I find this reaction a bit exaggerated and makes me feel uneasy. I'm a little afraid of his reaction, especially during the Marinford war.

Olvia and Toki

all good! but the modern tech seems to be a bit...

Do you write toriko? One piece like delicious food.

For me everything is balanced, the way you advance the story, but I would like to see people's reactions when they see the other animes like the aizen vs ichigo fight, the netero vs meruem fight, or sentimental scenes between some what else, but you do well I give your story a 9 out of 10 I give magic stone every time I can.

SUbe él manga de baki

Its super good tbh best one pIece fic in a minute

Great story so far