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SASORI571

SASORI571

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me gusta leer y escribir , soy otaku

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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5715d
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    I wouldn't mind Atom-Eve's biological mother but I wouldn't recommend Nolan becoming a woman, rather I think it would be better to go to a reality where Nolan is a woman and take her later to the original reality of Invincible, if so then to At least I wouldn't accept it, well this is just a recommendation because after all the story is yours.

    Ch 31 QUESTION.
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    I am Morty Smith
    Anime & Comics · Try_hard
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712mth
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    The story is good but I don't like the errors in the writing, you say that the character's name is Evan but it always says Ron as his name, you say that he ate a Zoan-type fruit but it says that he uses Enel lodge-type abilities, okay, are you. You translate it doesn't matter, ok you change some things it doesn't matter, but if you are going to change them, keep them changed and don't put the translated chapters and the chapters rewritten by you in disorder or at least be a little more consistent with the name and the abilities of the protagonist .

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    Dimensional Wanderer Starting with a Diary in One piece.
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5717mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter, and more chapters please

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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    Riser Phenex : I know the Plot
    Anime & Comics · NOOBwriter69
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5718mth
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    I loved the story although I read it when it was finished, I must say that I like how the story was, the character design and how it gradually moved away from Voldemort and more towards a true fusion of Tom and Harry.

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    Harry Potter: The Dark Lord rebirth
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5711yr
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    Fairy rail or Naruto

    Ch 406 Captain John
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    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
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    For me everything is balanced, the way you advance the story, but I would like to see people's reactions when they see the other animes like the aizen vs ichigo fight, the netero vs meruem fight, or sentimental scenes between some what else, but you do well I give your story a 9 out of 10 I give magic stone every time I can.

    Ch 140 [!Not Chapter!]
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    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
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    Yes

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    Naruto: The GodLike Hokage + Multiverse
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
    Commented

    Luna Lovegood Perfect Kawai

    Ch 4 Confirmed pairing
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    Harry Potter The Prime Merlinian
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
    Commented

    Danmachi

    Ch 8 Notice
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    Arbiter in Overlord
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
    Commented

    Los tres Primero Azula por qué en este momento es la más fácil de conseguir Luego toph ya que después de Azula ella será la más fácil de conseguir debido a su situación de ciega y odio hacia la nobleza del reino tierra ( su familia) Finalmente Katara , ella será la más difícil ya que es de la tribu del agua, pero se que lo conseguirás

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    Solo Leveling Avatar
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
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    Jericho

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    Reborn as Meliodas
    Anime & Comics · Dragonlord04
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
    Commented

    Yess kill zuko

    Ch 25 Young Master [The New Avatar] Pt. 2
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    Solo Leveling Avatar
    Anime & Comics · GhostyZ
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
    Commented

    Equip Azula

    Ch 17 IMPORTANT QUESTIONS
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    Solo Leveling Avatar
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
    Commented

    Opción 4

    Ch 55 POLL
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    MULTIVERSEL CAFE
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
    Commented

    Ino

    Ch 17 Notice
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    In Naruto As....Well Naruto
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5712yr
    Commented

    Tsubarachi

    Ch 50 NUM 1 WAIFU!!
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    MULTIVERSEL CAFE
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5713yr
    Commented

    Percy Jackson Harry Potter Bleach One piece Tokyo ghoul Shingeki no Kyojin ( attak on titan ) Fairy Tail

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    My Unconventional Delivery System!
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5713yr
    Commented

    Akame ga kill One punch Man Danganronpa Noragami Ladybug

    Ch 52 Author's note.
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    Protagonist Killer
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5713yr
    Commented

    Valió la pena la espera, esta es una de mis historias favoritas y enserio espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo

    Ch 51 Shenanigans starts!
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    Summoner of Strawhats
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  • SASORI571
    SASORI5713yr
    Commented

    Akame ga kill O MCU

    Ch 23 Last chance before I pick the next world
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    Solo Leveling Through the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · NoirZero11
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