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I wouldn't mind Atom-Eve's biological mother but I wouldn't recommend Nolan becoming a woman, rather I think it would be better to go to a reality where Nolan is a woman and take her later to the original reality of Invincible, if so then to At least I wouldn't accept it, well this is just a recommendation because after all the story is yours.
The story is good but I don't like the errors in the writing, you say that the character's name is Evan but it always says Ron as his name, you say that he ate a Zoan-type fruit but it says that he uses Enel lodge-type abilities, okay, are you. You translate it doesn't matter, ok you change some things it doesn't matter, but if you are going to change them, keep them changed and don't put the translated chapters and the chapters rewritten by you in disorder or at least be a little more consistent with the name and the abilities of the protagonist .
For me everything is balanced, the way you advance the story, but I would like to see people's reactions when they see the other animes like the aizen vs ichigo fight, the netero vs meruem fight, or sentimental scenes between some what else, but you do well I give your story a 9 out of 10 I give magic stone every time I can.
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Los tres Primero Azula por qué en este momento es la más fácil de conseguir Luego toph ya que después de Azula ella será la más fácil de conseguir debido a su situación de ciega y odio hacia la nobleza del reino tierra ( su familia) Finalmente Katara , ella será la más difícil ya que es de la tribu del agua, pero se que lo conseguirás
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Percy Jackson Harry Potter Bleach One piece Tokyo ghoul Shingeki no Kyojin ( attak on titan ) Fairy Tail