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I expected to have his speech when he criticizes Luffy for wanting to save his brother even though he is a pirate, and on the fact that he was responsible for keeping the scum of the world in the prison to protect the population. This speech was truly amazing

is there anything happening on webnovel? why are there no more popular works? why are the novel rankings empty? Did I miss something?

thnks

His stomach issues aren't caused by his devil fruit; it's because Magellan enjoys eating poisoned dishes (likely because of his devil fruit), which give him stomach aches. This is the second time I've stepped in to correct misconceptions about Magellan's power, and it feels like I'm a Magellan fanboy.

Thank you for the chapter. Author, I think you should merge two chapters into one; currently, there probably aren't even 1000 words in a single chapter.

So... Magellan is dangerous even for Haki users because his poison covers his body. I remind you, it is not a Logia but a Paramecia. The only ones who can fight him without taking heavy damage afterwards are those who have advanced Armament Haki, allowing them to strike without being affected. The poison, whether you have Haki or not, contaminates you.

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This got me thinking, and I agree with you on some things. The zone is an extreme concentration, allowing you to use 100% of your brain and physical abilities. However, to some extent, the Pokémon can take orders passively. What I mean is that it hears the orders but does not focus on them, allowing it to maintain this state. However, as it hears the orders, it can carry them out with its subconscious. I guess my explanation is bad, but I don't really know how to explain it in writing.

I have an account with a different pseudonym, but I don't write on it; I just read some fanfiction.

thnks

it's not a known fact but Dragonair does have wings, it's just that most of the time they are not deployed

It's funny, that's exactly the image I had in mind when I had this idea. Deoxys vs Rayquaza

What I thought of while writing this scene:

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I plan to further develop Edgar's character later by giving him a power-up. I wanted to portray him as an excellent trainer but with not enough Pokémon, limiting his choices in critical situations. Additionally, I aim to depict a gap between him and Archer, creating a sort of divide that he must bridge to become stronger and realize what he lacks. I can understand the disappointment, but it was intentional. Azurion had sent him on an investigation, not a battle, so I remain convinced that the way I've written the story is the right path to follow.

Completely, I'm glad someone knows these stories. Well, I didn't get into "New Normal," but I've read many stories inspired by it, and I've enjoyed them immensely. I'm a fan of "Hard Enough"; I didn't expect much when I started it, and I really appreciated it. I've also drawn inspiration from other incredible stories, particularly "Rocket's Exterminator"(BANIX) which I recommend to any Pokémon fan. It's mostly "Rocket's Exterminator" that convinced me to write a Pokémon fanfic with a specialist as the main character.

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Yes, I hesitated between him and Hody; then, I told myself that Neptune was also linked to the god of the oceans in mythology, and that was better.

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