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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Replied to BlackStar_BH

    Try Chronicles of the Heavenly Demon or Red Storm. There are many examples of Heavenly Demons out there capable of causing natural disasters even without a devil fruit.

    Ch 4 A Cultivator At The Level Of Elementary Profound Realm!
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    King Of Beasts In Against The Gods
    Book&Literature · BlackStar_BH
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Replied to BlackStar_BH

    You need to distinguish between 'see' and 'predict'. Read Tales of Demons & Gods. There is a cultivation technique called Heaven's Divination Technique. If you compare it to Observation Haki, it's like a drop of water and an ocean. There are many examples of techniques that allow cultivators to calculate the future and see the past. Can Observational Haki see the past? Writer-san, you wrote an ATG fanfic, are you pretending you don't know that a cultivator's Soul Power is capable of more than Conqueror's Haki? Come on, we even need to discuss Armament Haki, it won't even be able to penetrate a cultivator's dharma weapon. In short, everything Kaido has will be even more special if you send him to the world of Wuxia. In the Xianxia world, everything called haki is just a joke.

    Ch 4 A Cultivator At The Level Of Elementary Profound Realm!
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    King Of Beasts In Against The Gods
    Book&Literature · BlackStar_BH
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    Concepts like Haki were nothing special in the Xianxia world. Cultivators had sharper senses than Observation Haki. Something like killing intent or sword intent could exert more pressure than King's Haki. Even in Wuxia novels, there were many body forging techniques that could compete with Armament Haki. Apart from the existence of devil fruit, I don't think the world of One Piece is very special. A 'Heavenly Demon' from a random Korean martial arts novel could even kill Kaido.

    Ch 4 A Cultivator At The Level Of Elementary Profound Realm!
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    King Of Beasts In Against The Gods
    Book&Literature · BlackStar_BH
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    In Wuxia novels, Martial Artists fight using internal energy (Qi). In this case, when compared to cultivators, martial artists were generally only at the Qi Condensation stage. Peak martial artists (often called transcendents) were at most only equivalent to Foundation Establishment stage cultivators. So forget about the Gold Core or Nascent Soul, because that will never be in the Wuxia story. The peak power of the One Piece Realm, in my opinion is only the Sky Profound Realm. Pirates generally fight in a barbaric way. They had no cultivation methods or martial techniques. The moves displayed were simply the result of continuous battles that were roughly developed. So how could Kaido be on par with a BPS cultivator who had a lifespan of thousands of years?

    Ch 2 What's this world, I wonder?
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    King Of Beasts In Against The Gods
    Book&Literature · BlackStar_BH
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    How can 900 x 40 meters equal half the area of ​​a small town? Come on, an airport is even bigger than that. The village where my grandmother lived was even bigger.

    Ch 2 What's this world, I wonder?
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    King Of Beasts In Against The Gods
    Book&Literature · BlackStar_BH
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    I still can't believe you're an Arab man, writer-san. You have completely changed my view of Arabs.

    Ch 239 Getting A Character's Template!
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    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
    Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    Lol...You've made mistakes since the first chapter. Your whole novel is a mistake. I can't even count the number of mistakes you made, 'cause they were so many.

    Ch 76 Chapter 75
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    [transmigration- ATG route]
    Anime & Comics · nkcthereaper
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Posted

    hey, man. keep writing. You are a rare person in this industry. getting a fanfic that doesn't rely on canon bullshit is like finding the Rinnegan among 5 ninja villages. very rare! This novel is worth 1000 Naruto fanfic. so keep on writing.

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    Naruto: The Rise of Hanma Clan
    Anime & Comics · Dotencsure
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    Name him Itachi so he slaughters his clan. Lol

    Ch 23 Baki Hanma!
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    Naruto: The Rise of Hanma Clan
    Anime & Comics · Dotencsure
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    hahahah.. this is what I like. writers who are able to write plots! not an idiot who only relies on canons! Keep up the good work, man!

    Ch 16 Tobirama Senju and Mito Uzumaki!
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    Naruto: The Rise of Hanma Clan
    Anime & Comics · Dotencsure
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    I've always wondered, what's the point of creating an OP protagonist with multiple harems if he doesn't impregnate one. While the ninja world highly values bloodlines & kekkai genkai, I feel Rei is a loser.

    Ch 450 Ch450. Resignation
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    In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    How do I awaken Aya's children's sharingan?

    Ch 50 Chapter 50
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    I am the patriarch of Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Daoisttt
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Posted

    let me teach you, young man: fanfic + plot canon = writer idiot Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhghhhdtjdykkyyykyttttttjstjsykyktktkyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyytrdftyyttjtyuuyygg

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    The True Might of Senju
    Anime & Comics · RroY
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    Tsunade: Shut up!!! The above is an example of the worst dialogue writing style. Even elementary school kids would be embarrassed to use it. Thank you for wanting to change and develop for the better, writer-chan.

    Ch 16 Prelude to War
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    The True Might of Senju
    Anime & Comics · RroY
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Posted

    This novel has a unique premise, as well as extraordinary prospects. I hope the author can optimize its potential. this is the ONLY naruto fanfic that doesn't rely on plot canons, and the fulfillment of Konohagakure's wishes. And because it's so extraordinary. my only gripe is the repetitive R18 chapters. MC fucks his two wives almost every 2 chapters, and it's so boring. I have no problem with the R18, but can you do another variation? it's already 50 chapters and you gave MC a dozen kids just from 2 girls without talent?

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    I am the patriarch of Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Daoisttt
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Replied to WritingDreams

    Your logic is crooked writer-san. What's the point in knowing the future if you don't change it? Your city will be hit by a tsunami in 2 months. You know that, but you still don't do anything because you don't want to change the plot? LOL! Idi*t!

    Ch 3 Ruins and treasure
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    Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian)
    Others · WritingDreams
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    You only write fanfic but are afraid of the butterfly effect? So what's the point of you writing on a webtoon? It's just a waste of people's time.

    Ch 3 Ruins and treasure
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    Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian)
    Others · WritingDreams
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    WRITER IS SCUM IDIOT!

    Ch 89 R-18
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    Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)
    Book&Literature · Evil_Dragon
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    YOU ARE THE WORST AUTHOR IN THE WORLD. I'm really late reading this, otherwise I'll be cursing you throughout the chapter.

    Ch 58 Jasmine's rage
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    Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)
    Book&Literature · Evil_Dragon
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  • Eric_Kun
    Eric_Kun1yr
    Commented

    THE AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL IS A GAY!

    Ch 42 On their way to the Blue Wind Profound Palace(1)
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    Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)
    Book&Literature · Evil_Dragon
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