Almost a great story, uniquish attempt at a divergence in the story, and an entertaining change of pace. only problem is the author seems to pander to the audience that wants a tool bag MC who should only think about benefits and gains. like this might not be his new reality. Seemingly annoyed by all the main characters. "Ron isn't useful, grangers annoying, Dumbledore is evil." Its like the author wants a decent human being as the MC but keeps listening to the critics to be more evil. its honestly kinda sad. other than that I find the story interesting. hopefully the MC remembers that the friends in the book had unquestionable loyalty for some reason he actually questions them? lol must be an AU?
