Comments of chapter undefined of Altering Skyrim

A cool idea for the other people inserted would be from time to time show how their actions effect the world like one took over the thief's guild and bankrupt winter hold as a example and forces the storm guards to go on retreat

No way hes that powerful that soon. The authority people before would not have given them that much power. Thank God you're writing's really good and I am entertained

Destruction school... The most useless skill for me and anyone who played vanilla Skyrim in legendary difficulty. Enchanting and Blacksmithing for Life!

4 chapters in might want to stick with the main character and get the story rolling

I wouldn't mind him meeting the other earthlys but I would rather have it where they don't know that the others are infact earthlys, unless they find out themselfs.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

I hate third person point of view, because then their is no surprise in what to expect.

Thanks

thanks for the chapter

I thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍