It's a good story, but until I hear otherwise, it is looking like a copy of ProbablyATurnip on Scribblehub

Cool chapter, but I have a question. Doesn't fool's obsession make any development abilities max rank after getting them.

I like the idea of dream mana and the fact you can't perfectly combine spells. It would be op if you could combine all flesh spell to be super strong/durable 👌

Barbas is a good boy. If you do what I think you're doing, it about to be hunting season.

it's unfortunate, but you do what you need to do. I would rather wait for chapters, then miss out on this amazing story .

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Wow, it's amazing so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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welcome back, and I say just Borderlands. If you choose multiverse; you could have it he has to 'beat' a world to have powers transfer to the next world. example, I beat Skyrim, and now I can use shouts on Pandora.

So far, it's a great story that takes a good concept from Perseus the Conquer. Can't wait to see how it goes.

Great story, and I hope your book does just as well, but finished, unlike Perseus the Conquer

Good chapter and I like you brought over Jackie along with the Conquer powers

So far, this is a good book well written, and you can see the authors passion for the game. Hope to see this story go a long way.

Great chapter. Also, it would be cool if by maxing icon abilities, you can use them in Ifrit mode. imagine Ifrit throwing a lightning bolt.

So far, it's a great story.

Great chapter and a cool idea of a world to visit is Lord Of Rings. There, you could find free artifacts/armor.

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