The story been going way downhill since the rebellion. So many decisions just didn't make sense. He did everything in the rebellion and wasted away his life just to bend the knee? when he already had the greatest city in the world. This was like the culmination of it all, think the story is unreadable now.

Man really don't like it when you write about ash and team rocket. All the interactions come through feeling extremely stupid especially the way Ash acts and treats everything. To make it worst, you add in Erika and I just completely question the logic behind alot of the decision. Why run into a potential team rocket base alone? just doesn't make sense. If ash did it alone I could blame his young master syndrome for it... but Erika is part of her league. Why didn't she at least call someone to give a warning or ask for back up?.....

Man what a make let down. Clones of any sorts always ruins a book. To many things and the story tends to spiral out of control. I thought we avoided the whole clones situation, now you randomly give him a Clone power from the op system that could have been anything. What a letdown.

These last few chapters seem so cringey and forced. Like this is now just beyond oblivious and dumb. Really hard to read, and losing alot of interest cause of it.

oh god.... not clones . clones universally kill all novels. things are never the same afterwards.

His system is based on karma. There's no reason to stockpile money if he ain't gonna use it. Always a cause and effect. Steal from the evil rich and they will do worse things to get more money or it'll effect the ppl working for them. So unless he becomes a full time vigilante and go after them as well, probably not worth it for the effort and time required to be meaningful for karma.

Chapters are getting extremely bad and repetitive. identical paragraphs back to back, probably due to using ai.

You can also notice certain paragraphs repeating itself with the same content, but in different style.

Hidden gem pokemon story. op Mc with aura focus long chapters 100+ chapters

Disappointing . Petrel seems to ALWAYS escape in every pokemon story no matter how big an advantage the Mc has. No one ever brave enough to completely change canon.

He stated in previous chapters he wanted to fight the main teams.

Characterization in the beginnings is pretty bad especially in this chapter. With great intellect comes photographic memory as well as old memories, yet Mc continues to act like, I love my parents, I enjoy these new parents, go to work, never see your son, I completely understand.... yet forgets that they will die soon by canon timeline. That's not how someone who supposedly loves their parents should be acting if you know their gonna die... unless you forgot, yet you remember useless school information? Full of holes in this chapter.

This. Definitely this. Everything else has been overdone. I want to see what kind of fun insanity you can do with the Worm setting.

Wait wait wait..... Instead of Bobby B dying.... his death will instead start the war of the 5 kings. that's my prediction now.

Lol... I was thinking the same thing while reading this. at first it was like... haha dumb meph sitting there watching Layla power up. .. then Layla goes and chills and let's him power up. SMH

Ash suddenly becomes the biggest murderhobo in the entire series in one arc lol. He's the definition of a Chinese xianxia MCreincarnator - checkKnew about the team rocket plot by foreknowledge and actual proof on ship, but kept everything to himself for loot - checkLooted the fk out of the place while everyone busy battling for their lives - checkShow up last minute to act like the hero - check. Knowingly endangered the lives of many many children, including all his friends who are technically children without a shed of remorse- check

Jorah gonna be calling her Lyanna "the Social Justice Warrior " for her nickname.

Sad to hear. Definitely considering your patreon, but wish the pokemon series was a higher priority. I unfortunately gave up on the hp series a while back.

I don't understand this chapter. Why did he want goh to come along if from what the author mentioned, doesn't seem to like goh at all? How does goh being there as in anything extra? wouldn't it be better to just ignore him....

Those Gacha results are horrendous. Giving him 2 taskmaster items back to back after getting taskmaster kills any randomness or fake idea of this being an actual gacha, cause those possibility are literally impossible for it to happen that way. The other results are cool and unique, but that fake randomness kills alot of the fun for this novel imo.