Comments of chapter undefined of Gone 11183

Is is he going to fix the vanishing cabinet so that he and his family/friends can use it to leave and return to hogwarts?

I like the reaction quite realistic

I just finished the last chapter then bam! there's a new update 😆

Following Draco's idea of ​​using fire and having Amelia (daughter of a faithful Grindelwald follower) as aunt and teacher, I imagine Draco developing magic similar to Grindelwald's "Protego diabolica", but keeping the form of a snake .. . 🤔🤔 [img=exp][img=exp]

I really like your story so far but this chapter made me think this Amelia is probably dumb or thinks too highly of herself...

what i like most about mc's elemental magic is that the fire takes the properties of the object it turns into..... for example the fire snake actually behaves like a snake biting the mans nake, going for the most vital part instead of just attacking head on....... I'm loving this story.... keep the chapters coming.....

great job. I love how he can animate his fire. I suggest getting that magical fire snake as a familiar. I can't remember it's name

Thx

Snape when he sees Draco at school:

good chapter. -it is better that his first death happens, than later when it can be fatal xD.

Es curioso como el darle un aspecto más humano al personaje lo hace más interesante Por lo general otros escritores prefieren hacer a sus personajes un sinónimo de la perfección en cualquier caso lo que arruina la historia por eso a la tuya le doy un 10

Thanks for the chapter i absolutely Like the fact that MC Just bodied some No names makes me feel proud.

I love the wip/snake fire thing 😍 Now it:s time to use this to woo Amelia Thx for the chapter ❤❤❤

will he use only fire?

pls,kill more

You should be it is a great chapter.

great job and thank you very much