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Seldom can a writer completely and wholly immerse me in a character but this author has done it. From the name choice to every mannerism, Nabi’s development is a tragic joy to witness in itself. Add in an incredible setting and gorgeous world-building and we have ourselves the epitome of a good book.
Really good story! By reading this till the chapter 16, I can say that the author has done lots of research about vampires. And our female lead, I like how bold she is. If she want something, she will just go for it. side characters are also well designed, specifically Hana. And the concept of mind link, soo awesome! I totally recommend this to every vampire lover. Keep up with the good work, dear author. My best wishes!
I am reviewed after reading your latest 19th chapter. The writer takes us to a roller-coaster ride of emotions. I was happy, sad and frustrated too. Being a fan of fantasy romance, this book is one of my best reads.The emotions of other characters were well illustrated along with the leads. Very intriguing plot. Eagerly waiting for the rest chapters!!
The author has done a good job of projecting the complex thoughts running inside every character. The progression of the story and the emotions feel natural and not forced. The character design and story development is a great plus for this novel. Though there are few grammatical mistakes in the first few chapters, the quality of the writing improve significantly after. A great novel... Keep up the good work.
Great story. (From this point onwards I will be joking so don't get offended) MC is a normal girl who is crazy about vampire novels, movies, documentaries. Vampires in general. So oneday after coming to hostel after matchmaking Hana (her friend) with Ian (another friend). She meets with her strange roomate and her more strange brother. What can be more crazy than two strangers hearing each others thoughts? Now the question is, Can these two strange people be vampires? If they are is she his partner? We will get all this answers in this series. Writing Quality - It's medium it can be polished further. But I will point out there are really few grammar mistakes that's a plus point. Loved that the names you chose were easy to read. Don't wanna see Reneseme whatever.(I can't even spell it.) Story Development - It's smooth direct to point. Mc and ML meet in between 3 to 6 chapter. There is really not much mystery point here about the siblings being vampire as MC being knowledgeable about vampires recognises it immediately. But the point is will people believe her? Will she fall for this guy? Character Design - MC is out going she loves vampire novels, meeting her friends, want to get popular in college like any normal college student. ML, I am skeptical about him, he doesn't let my poor mc eat her lunch. He still want recognition even in those moments. Let's stop joking he is handsome, funny at times, can be jealous type. World background - It's normal college background with our cast being in senior year of their college. World background is well written. Will I recommend this story? Of course, there are so many vampire fan out there who would love this story. There is a age gap in the story but we have take specie difference in consideration. Keep up great work author. (Note : There are some people who might say 'all vampire love stories are trash' ignore them keep writing. They are in the wrong genre don't lose hope.)
Nabi is absolutely hilarious! She had me laughing and cackling since the first chapter! She's a real relateble chracter and I enjoyed reading about things through her perspective! The writing had a few grammatical errors here and there, but the writing still was well done and it does an awesome job of showing characterization and dialouge! Overall, I enjoyed reading and I think every reader needs to check this story out! :)
I just got to the end of this and the way i see it is: First, THE STYLE is so smooth and captivating like really how do you do that? Second, THE EMOTIONS you stir in the FM is the most obsessing part of the story. Third, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND this for anyone who is obsessed with romance. I can't wait for more. A great author with an amazing masterpiece!
It's a good story. The plotline was interesting, and the characterization was well done. I especially like the female lead's character. Its world background and story development were nicely executed. The writing quality was good as the author's writing style was direct and minimal. There were just a few grammatical errors and typos, but those could be edited and revised. I think that it'll be better as it goes on and with good proofreading. Overall, it was a good story. I wish the author the best of luck!
This story has a touch of reality that we often forgot about. When we are confronted with what we had dreams our entire life of, it may not be as smooth as we think it would be. A very great and compelling story. A light and heart-warming romance with a tinge of reality. Kudos to the author and keep up the good work. Cheers.
First, the story's vibe and writing quality were light and easy to digest. Second, the writing quality was great. There are a number of technical and grammatical errors especially in the first few chapters, but those are something that could be easily fixed without hurting the story or the plot. Third, the character design was amazing and cool - from the MC's to the other characters. I personally like the relationship between Hana and Nabi. Overall, this is an amazing story. Keep it up!
This is fantastic, at first I thought this would just be the normal cliché vampire novel, but I didn't expect it to be written really well. The development of the characters are fantastic, I can see that you took time writing and thinking this is impressive. Keely up the good work bud and can't wait for more.