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My Young Vampire Man

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SEP1A
SEP1ALv10SEP1A

Seldom can a writer completely and wholly immerse me in a character but this author has done it. From the name choice to every mannerism, Nabi’s development is a tragic joy to witness in itself. Add in an incredible setting and gorgeous world-building and we have ourselves the epitome of a good book.

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koshi_
koshi_Lv4koshi_

Really good story! By reading this till the chapter 16, I can say that the author has done lots of research about vampires. And our female lead, I like how bold she is. If she want something, she will just go for it. side characters are also well designed, specifically Hana. And the concept of mind link, soo awesome! I totally recommend this to every vampire lover. Keep up with the good work, dear author. My best wishes!

Dream_Catcher23
Dream_Catcher23Lv10Dream_Catcher23

I am reviewed after reading your latest 19th chapter. The writer takes us to a roller-coaster ride of emotions. I was happy, sad and frustrated too. Being a fan of fantasy romance, this book is one of my best reads.The emotions of other characters were well illustrated along with the leads. Very intriguing plot. Eagerly waiting for the rest chapters!!

ViciousPepper
ViciousPepperLv4ViciousPepper

The author has done a good job of projecting the complex thoughts running inside every character. The progression of the story and the emotions feel natural and not forced. The character design and story development is a great plus for this novel. Though there are few grammatical mistakes in the first few chapters, the quality of the writing improve significantly after. A great novel... Keep up the good work.

Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123Lv3Chase_Xavier_123

Great story. (From this point onwards I will be joking so don't get offended) MC is a normal girl who is crazy about vampire novels, movies, documentaries. Vampires in general. So oneday after coming to hostel after matchmaking Hana (her friend) with Ian (another friend). She meets with her strange roomate and her more strange brother. What can be more crazy than two strangers hearing each others thoughts? Now the question is, Can these two strange people be vampires? If they are is she his partner? We will get all this answers in this series. Writing Quality - It's medium it can be polished further. But I will point out there are really few grammar mistakes that's a plus point. Loved that the names you chose were easy to read. Don't wanna see Reneseme whatever.(I can't even spell it.) Story Development - It's smooth direct to point. Mc and ML meet in between 3 to 6 chapter. There is really not much mystery point here about the siblings being vampire as MC being knowledgeable about vampires recognises it immediately. But the point is will people believe her? Will she fall for this guy? Character Design - MC is out going she loves vampire novels, meeting her friends, want to get popular in college like any normal college student. ML, I am skeptical about him, he doesn't let my poor mc eat her lunch. He still want recognition even in those moments. Let's stop joking he is handsome, funny at times, can be jealous type. World background - It's normal college background with our cast being in senior year of their college. World background is well written. Will I recommend this story? Of course, there are so many vampire fan out there who would love this story. There is a age gap in the story but we have take specie difference in consideration. Keep up great work author. (Note : There are some people who might say 'all vampire love stories are trash' ignore them keep writing. They are in the wrong genre don't lose hope.)

immortal_shizu322
immortal_shizu322Lv1immortal_shizu322

mann this coverr really pretty imma already a big fan of vampire stories gonna wait for next chaps the story thus far is supeerrr good keep it up author

Scarlet5ky
Scarlet5kyLv6Scarlet5ky

Amazing novel! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more chapters to release! And don't keep us hanging, dear author! I read everything in one go, but can't wait now with this big gap in release!

NotBeatrix
NotBeatrixLv2NotBeatrix

Nabi is absolutely hilarious! She had me laughing and cackling since the first chapter! She's a real relateble chracter and I enjoyed reading about things through her perspective! The writing had a few grammatical errors here and there, but the writing still was well done and it does an awesome job of showing characterization and dialouge! Overall, I enjoyed reading and I think every reader needs to check this story out! :)

Ice_Princesss
Ice_PrincesssLv4Ice_Princesss

Ah I love Nabi! Honestly, I feel like I can relate to her cuz I be like in love with all these fantasy creatures and end up fantasizing over them 😂 Really love the story from the writing to the character development to the plot .I'm gonna keep an eye on this [img=recommend]

Mi_de0110
Mi_de0110Lv1Mi_de0110

Really amazing. I hardly read teen stories but this was really good. The author had really put a great effort into it. Totally worth reading!

Darine_ALRAMMAH
Darine_ALRAMMAHLv1Darine_ALRAMMAH

I just got to the end of this and the way i see it is: First, THE STYLE is so smooth and captivating like really how do you do that? Second, THE EMOTIONS you stir in the FM is the most obsessing part of the story. Third, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND this for anyone who is obsessed with romance. I can't wait for more. A great author with an amazing masterpiece!

MayDreamer
MayDreamerLv4MayDreamer

The story is kinda sweet and romantic, and vampire has always been one of my favorite theme. plus, the description, feeling are well organized and are kind of simple so it won't give you a headache to understand. Good work Author!!!

Kara_wish_writes
Kara_wish_writesLv12Kara_wish_writes

It has great story for people who love stories about vampire 's just like the female lead. Also it has one of the most unique names for characters

Luminous_Arcadian
Luminous_ArcadianLv3Luminous_Arcadian

It's a good story. The plotline was interesting, and the characterization was well done. I especially like the female lead's character. Its world background and story development were nicely executed. The writing quality was good as the author's writing style was direct and minimal. There were just a few grammatical errors and typos, but those could be edited and revised. I think that it'll be better as it goes on and with good proofreading. Overall, it was a good story. I wish the author the best of luck!

cookiez_tiffe
cookiez_tiffeLv13cookiez_tiffe

This story has a touch of reality that we often forgot about. When we are confronted with what we had dreams our entire life of, it may not be as smooth as we think it would be. A very great and compelling story. A light and heart-warming romance with a tinge of reality. Kudos to the author and keep up the good work. Cheers.

Yairy
YairyLv2Yairy

Exciting characters, fun premise. A nice read on the weekend! I can't wait to see more. This story has so much potential from the little I've read so far. Keep up the great work, writer!

Akira_Monadelle
Akira_MonadelleLv13Akira_Monadelle

I so related with Nabi, I'm a vampire fanatic too 😫😫. Author put me in the story, Nabi and I shall binge Originals, Vampire Diaries, Vampire Academy and so much moreee!!! This novel is DEFINITELY my type lol as you can probably see. Keep up the wonderful work author 😊

Mia_Evergreen
Mia_EvergreenLv2Mia_Evergreen

Amazing!! not a Vampire Fan but this one hook me from Start. such an amazing story development. the characters are funny and amazing also. Nabi and B are perfect match

JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv1JJ_Prakoso

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ClaisiceLouice
ClaisiceLouiceLv1ClaisiceLouice

First, the story's vibe and writing quality were light and easy to digest. Second, the writing quality was great. There are a number of technical and grammatical errors especially in the first few chapters, but those are something that could be easily fixed without hurting the story or the plot. Third, the character design was amazing and cool - from the MC's to the other characters. I personally like the relationship between Hana and Nabi. Overall, this is an amazing story. Keep it up!

SabergKeys
SabergKeysLv2SabergKeys

This is fantastic, at first I thought this would just be the normal cliché vampire novel, but I didn't expect it to be written really well. The development of the characters are fantastic, I can see that you took time writing and thinking this is impressive. Keely up the good work bud and can't wait for more.

Florence_Foli
Florence_FoliLv3Florence_Foli

I have been reading works of authors and most of them write without research. I can tell the author is a true vampire fan because it looks like she did a pretty thorough job researching for her work. A world of sharmans and vampires. If you are a lover of adventure and fantasy then this is for you.