I was a Nerfed Hero in Another World

A great novel regarding the game named "Magique". Although the work only has four chapters, it has great potentianl. Protagonist Arthur is great character in game but in reality he is a noob. He gave his character everything he wanted in real life but never had it. He is a level 100 hero. Later because of some misfortune he got reiencarnated in the game world.

Have you ever heard of the legends of King Arthur? Well, this is not the Arthur that you know. He doesn’t have the legendary sword, Excalibur. He doesn’t have the decision making of a leader. He is fragile like a feather. He is not from that world. But he will become a hero that the Kingdom of Camelot needs. Or would he become that hero that the people asked for? The hero that the people needed? What is a hero, anyway? A knight in shining armour? I think that’s what he is. Or is he? Arthur Wyllt

Just like what the title says, hero that has been overly nerfed in his game world. There are a lot of novels going with this premise, but author take a unique stand on it by giving the protagonist the desire to be someone like King Arthur. Writing is good and I see no obvious grmmatical problems so far. Pacing of the story also moves well despite it being a few chapter. However, it is important to take note that the protagonist will grow as a character as more of the story develops. A great read with a weak to strong theme with a potential of having an amazing world development.

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yeah the story sounds great and well writen but i don't know it's just really strange I can't find myself to be interested in this one it says that he was like a real pro in the game but his reactions are really lacking and all the dialogues makes me puke blood would recommend but I will not read good luck author

So there are a lot of things that can be improved upon. The writing itself is serviceable; as in there are no glaring mistakes except it being pretty poorly written and not reading too well. The information isn't presented in a satisfying way at all. It's mostly just info and exposition dumps. Better to first create intrigue then reveal things bit by bit, more through actions and dialogue than just prose. One of the biggest problems is that your suspension of disbelief really needs to be taken for a ride for you to enjoy this. He calls himself his real name but it stated that he's also somehow anonymous. No cares about anything but the game to the degree that parents don't care about their children even. Somehow broken glasses cause the MC to have "slashes all over his body" and he doesn't care since they'll "heal on their own". No, and infection? You could say that he doesn't care about the chances of infection but you didn't. Somehow he's one of the top ranked players in a game that has over taken the whole world but no one knows him. He gets electricuted and tried to touch some leather to save himself? What. And this was all in the first two chapters. Also he was injured after being transported but there's no HP damage. Lots of stuff like that.MC literally states his goals. "Be a hero people depend on." Please no, show don't tell ffs. Uses of metaphors in dialogue is weird. It's done often as well. Everything has a stilted and unnatural feeling to it. As far as originality goes there is barely any. A whole scene was copied, lines from movies are taken wholesale. Strange choices for a novel.Strange exaggerations like saying some extras laugh is something you'll never forget, or a normal village is compared to a painting of angles. Descriptions like these retroactively downplay any memorable scenes in the future. If you describe the mundane in such a way how will you describe something actually important or supposedly breathtaking. Generally it's written strangely with mismatched descriptions and metaphors, like describing a 40-50 yr old man as a youngster, or a brother describing her sisters eyes like "stars in the sky" in casual conversation, etc, etc.A lot more I can say but you get the gist. All together it's not that bad I guess.

it could become the best if not for the author lazyness . there are lot of mistake that author maked ... the first and foremost one that author don't show the level up stats of this system.... second MC killed the org but still Didint level up.... 3rd one is MC is stupid.... and major one of the mistake is that author make the MC look stupid man who follow the principal of the good return with good where it is should be all man for him self.... and MC don't kill anyone thats also one of the big major mistake... you have to kill them who try to kill you .. otherwise what are you leaving in the old age of swords where you don't know anything.... lol that's all the logic author don't make it that's why some people honesty answer is garbage... and I will say the same garbage

Writing quality : So far so good, I did find a couple of mistakes, but they are really small, and rather than mistakes it's more like the author forgot to type a word. Still, excluding that, the writing quality is nothing short of good. Stability of updates : Can't give anything below 5 stars since so far the author has been really stable with the updates. It has to be noted that the story is new so I can only give it 5 stars, Hopefully, the author remains consistent like this as I really love this story so far Story development : The story only has 7 chapters so I don't have a lot of material to make a proper judgment, but all I can say so far is that the story is really good I am loving the way it is currently going. Character design : Again only 7 chapters, but in the first 4 chapters, we can an in-depth description of the protagonist, Arthur. World background : Same as the previous three. I mean, you can't just build a world in a few chapters. But, I will still give it 5 stars since it seems like the story is going in the right direction. I have really high hopes for this novel as I really like author previous work Goblin feast Overall - 5 stars. This is my opinion after reading 7 chapters. Really good stuff.

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this is brandon gould i am responding to a revew swap here is my review I enjoyed reading this book, the MC is from what i have read so far to be interseting and the first three chapter set up the world and the game in a easy and well written way, the writer did a very good job creating this story and i hope to see more of it to see where it leads

It has an interesting and great story to tell. I would like to see what would happen to the mc as time goes on. Added it to the Library. Great Work Author :)

Another wonderful book made by this amazing author! I’ll be giving it 5 stars cause its so goodd! Great job author! I totally reccomend this to other readers out there! Keep up the excellent work!