Comments of chapter undefined of War Soul: Tale of The White Blossom Spearman.

Myah's background is tragic, and his uncle betraying him is even more tragic.

chibi... u improved ur writing by a large margin... this is how u write an emotional scene... complete contrast from kaic system... bravo

Hi Chibi. Found your story while browsing. First chapter, it had good parts. a couple of tense here and there but overall pretty good. I do think the laugh by the uncle at the end was a bit much. The whole act was despicable and the laugh there is kind of awkward or a bit much. maybe looking down at his dying nephew with a smirk on his face. not sure. thank you for the chapter.

this the perfect example of equivalent exchange, boy there trying his hardest to recover and has hope as he slowly feels his limbs, but his uncle put him in a "accident", watches as his nephew hopes slowly crumbles, boy gets a wish and zooms off with his soul in a black Pearl in which it kills a chunk of the human population and mutates the animals, killing off an even larger chunk of them.

it was tragic enough but the best part can only be when he makes his wish.