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OrdinaryRandom

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Hello my name is, Random. I'm an author. Is there anything else to say?

2021-06-08 JoinedGlobal
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Replied to Ian_Gopez

    well, keep writing and read more books

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    Steiner's Memories
    Fantasy · Ian_Gopez
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Replied to Athena_Amor

    I Became An AntiHero

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 :- intro
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    The Chronicle of Dark Horse
    Fantasy · Athena_Amor
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Commented

    Wanna review the swap? I'll read and review your novel and you can read and review mine? reviews need to be honest

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 :- intro
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    The Chronicle of Dark Horse
    Fantasy · Athena_Amor
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Posted

    It's a hot mess, do not read this don't even try you won't be able to. Grammar is none existent. I would've recommended that the author use Grammarly but I doubt that it could help. read some good books author.

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    Steiner's Memories
    Fantasy · Ian_Gopez
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Posted

    All you lack is writing quality, apart from that you have everything. Myah seems like a good character although his design is quite feminine ;) Keep up the good work. I've read 3 chapters till now and apart from the grammar, everything is nice.

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    War Soul: Tale of The White Blossom Spearman.
    Fantasy · ChibiSage
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Commented

    Myah's background is tragic, and his uncle betraying him is even more tragic.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: A new beginning.
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    War Soul: Tale of The White Blossom Spearman.
    Fantasy · ChibiSage
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Replied to Traenson

    I think that's what he's doing... no offense author.

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    I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
    Fantasy · Alex_Destro
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Commented

    dude, you can't describe stats with "Average" it needs to be a number. just don't add a system if you're going to write average

    (Strength: Average )
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    Reborn And Became A Wendigo
    Fantasy · Drakonos_Drake
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Commented

    A demonic-looking angel? yeah right

    " Child you died while shielding your friend and caught my attention. I am the Angel Of reincarnation you will be reborn in a world of your not so typical fantasy world of systems"
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    Reborn And Became A Wendigo
    Fantasy · Drakonos_Drake
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Commented

    Hey! your novel doesn't have any reviews. Mind if we review swap? I'll review yours and in exchange, you can review mine. if you don't want to just delete this comment.

    Nothing unusual was happening, it was just another peaceful day in the month of September, with no hint of what was to come. However this peaceful day would come to be known as "Day Zero" in the new calendar - our current Venante calendar - also commonly known as the "demon fall"...
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    Anomaly Hunters
    Fantasy · JgHistorys
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Posted

    Why a 5 star? cus I'm a shameless author! okay seriously though do read this. I tried my best to bring something new to the table. if you guys don't like it just drop it, but if you like it review it! Thanks

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    I Became An Anti-Hero
    Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Commented

    I'll continue it, but I'm currently busy in real life.

    Ch 28 Chapter 28: Need a ship
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    Space Demon System
    Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Replied to Snoodle_Booper

    oh, btw I've dropped this I can't continue this novel anymore idk what was wrong with me when I wrote this but when i started but reading OH BOY did I write A LOT of things that could assist my—non exisistant— goal of going to prison at a young age.

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    Bogeyman
    Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Replied to

    happy with the explaination?

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    Bogeyman
    Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Replied to P1g_sfh23

    No, but you only read and review the authors books. also, you have a reading time of 0.1 Hours. how did u read 4 books in 10 minutes?

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    Vhjk
    Fantasy · I_madethatflipTV3
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Replied to P1g_sfh23

    bruh you're literally the authors alt account

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    Vhjk
    Fantasy · I_madethatflipTV3
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Replied to Imactuallyverylazy

    yeah, I've been trying to update the previous chapters, it's taking a while though

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: System!?
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    Space Demon System
    Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Commented

    That might've happened cus my phone autocorrected to Granite. lol

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Lore's Bargain
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    Space Demon System
    Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Replied to RuinedWorld

    Yup! xD forgot to proofread the first chapter.

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    Space Demon System
    Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom
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  • OrdinaryRandom
    OrdinaryRandom2yr
    Commented

    Thank you for the suggestion and Thank you for taking the time to read my novel.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: An ordinary day
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    Space Demon System
    Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom
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