ChibiSage
Hi Chibi. Found your story while browsing. First chapter, it had good parts. a couple of tense here and there but overall pretty good. I do think the laugh by the uncle at the end was a bit much. The whole act was despicable and the laugh there is kind of awkward or a bit much. maybe looking down at his dying nephew with a smirk on his face. not sure. thank you for the chapter.
this the perfect example of equivalent exchange, boy there trying his hardest to recover and has hope as he slowly feels his limbs, but his uncle put him in a "accident", watches as his nephew hopes slowly crumbles, boy gets a wish and zooms off with his soul in a black Pearl in which it kills a chunk of the human population and mutates the animals, killing off an even larger chunk of them.