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Comments of chapter undefined of MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master

ASSBEYK
ASSBEYKLv1ASSBEYK

There are many descriptions and events that seen disparate. The expressions are not natural and a speech has been added and diesn't show a coherance in the script. The plot is not well emphasized inside this script. I think there is vengeance alone without the microprocessors of the story. Keep on it!

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Mystero
MysteroLv12Mystero

I feel as if though all the numbers in this novel is just exaggerated, starting from 20mill illness to 95% of population playing the game. If you really think about it according to google there is 9% of old people as well as 29% of kids of all population in the world. So its practically impossible to get 95%

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Power_LabourRanger
Power_LabourRangerLv13Power_LabourRanger

uff another indian naming novel. am indian. but when u see some indian stuff like rajputs, or indian names i just get cringes .. author san dont hate me. lol. am jst honest.. ii love the novel. but when ii come across indians names, lol. even warlock of magus, leyling name his city lilitpur or somethings.. soo much cringe😭😂😂😂

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Vampfan1
Vampfan1Lv13Vampfan1

Why repay Kindness Ten Fold but Unkindness a Thousand Fold? Be better to repay Kindness a Hundred Fold, True Friendship and loyalty a Thousand Fold, Unkindness a Hundred Fold (not including minor petty incidents, that would just cause more issue, at worst Ten Fold) and True Enmity Ten Thousand Fold.

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OllieZ
OllieZLv6OllieZ

I want to read this as it seems like the kind of stories I like... but the grammar is stoping me, as it reads as a rough draft. I'll come back whenever this is edited. I hope the author invest the monies on hiring one.

Vampfan1
Vampfan1Lv13Vampfan1

What no cute innocent Loli Sister to protect, pamper and be driven & empowered by?

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BaeMax99
BaeMax99Lv4BaeMax99

Common reincarnation troupe so far. Lets continue for a bit see if gets worse or better.

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Dante_Luca
Dante_LucaLv3Dante_Luca

I already have a bad feeling about this, its like The Ancients World all over again. I hope that this wont be a waste of time

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Neokaiser
NeokaiserLv2Neokaiser

OK so far so good. The only thing that got me thinking was how did a non fatal sickness cost 20 million dollars to treat?

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Sleepyreader
SleepyreaderLv5Sleepyreader

Hopefully the grammar gets better as this gones along

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Vansh_Raj_2291
Vansh_Raj_2291Lv4Vansh_Raj_2291

thanks for the chapter

Rikuo_Pokemaster
Rikuo_PokemasterLv3Rikuo_Pokemaster

Join the Like Me Club!

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Spade_Z_
Spade_Z_Lv15Spade_Z_

Just a Spade casually dropping by ♠️💚

Bluemoonstarviolet
BluemoonstarvioletLv4Bluemoonstarviolet

Hmm

blue_heart
blue_heartLv2blue_heart

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Daoist494377
Daoist494377Lv1Daoist494377

i love novel about reincarnation n game. i hope this one will be a master piece. good luck for the author 👍

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shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1shashank_panthri

A good start with the only worrying thing being the 'rough draft' English and a personal one, why does he have a brother and not a cute little sister.( I know that would have been too cliche but I would rather have a cute little sister than a brother a hundred times over, again personal preference)

Rownn
RownnLv1Rownn

I'm seeing quite a bit of Indians being racist towards the author for being Indian, just baffling. hope India and its people really aren't like this comment section.

EkVillain
EkVillainLv2EkVillain

pompom

jenchuchaelisa
jenchuchaelisaLv4jenchuchaelisa

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RoeDear
RoeDearLv14RoeDear

Nice