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If Killer B is 10 years old, it is definetely too early. I would have waited for him to be at least 14-15 years old, already Chunin-Jonin levels. And even then, the 3rd Raikage is still alive, Hachibi's rival for a lot of years, who recently "won" the fight by sealing him again. Any person would be reluctant to follow orders of your rival/enemy and the true person responsible of your incarciration. Hachibi would have mellowed out more after 3rd Raikage's death, with his son A being more soft on Killer B and their sibling relationship.
No Calm mind?
Ouff, wasn't he just a teen? A pity.
What about those Pokemon that don't evolve? They can't use the push of evolution to improve their talent. Another example of the disadvantages of the Talent System, it makes single stage Pokemon very non desirable, even if they were already unpopular IRL.
I would have preferred a Gold (one stp to the highest Platinum) Pokemon tbh, as I can't grasp the value of what she gave her. This Abra must be High Gold/Platinum talent, due the spoons worth... If not, another Gold psychic Pokemon would have been better.
Not a fan of Umbreon, not because of her species, but because she doesn't fit MC's hyper offensive team nor Author's writing style. Umbreon is a mixed defensive tank. Her offensive moves are lackluster, her abilities are useless, she is not the special attacker MC needs, she can't do crowd control, she doesn't excel on the typical role of Dark types (debuffer, become annoyances, disruptive)... The worst in my opinion, you author don't excel in describing Pokemon battles, and a defensive Pokemon that focuses on outlasting her opponents is not your style of writing battles either, as you usually go for brute force, without using tactics. At least she can be a Healer with Wish+Heal Bell. I prefer you don't give MC every Eeveelution, as it will overcrowd his already full team, that already aren't being given enpugh screentime and development.
Musharna in the games are lame, but "IRL", having a Psychic Pokemon that helps with sleeping must be a luxury. Even their abilities Telepathy, Synchronize and Forwarn are very useful, and can be expanded with Worldbuilding. In games they can't use Teleport, but Ally Switch should be useful enough to save its trainer/teammates life when needed.
Hummm... it looks like Fairy might become his future gym's speciality đ... Also get a Clefable/Clefairy for the main team! 3 of their 4 possible abilities are top tier Abilities: Magic Guard (cannot be damaged indirectly like poison, burn, hazards, Life Orb ), Unaware (ignores enemies stat boosts) and Clefairy's OP Friend Guard (allies receive only 75% of damage).
He needs Shadow Ball, Solar Beam, Swift, Zap Cannon to pair with Lock-On... and every Status move you can
He needs Taunt, Trailblaze, Sleep Talk, protect, Facade. And especially the moves Aerial Ace and Zen Headbutt to deal with Fighting types. Dark types also to deal with Ghosts like Throat Chop, Sucker Punch, Knock Off, Lash Out, etc.
He needs Reflect, Detect, Rain Dance, Sleep Talk, Taunt, Signal Beam, Rock Slide, Psychic, Magnet Rise, Flash, Electroweb, Electric Terrain, Earthquake, Volt Switch... and even Teleport if you want to include a Gen2 Move tutor.