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OllieZ

OllieZ

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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ10h
    Commented

    Ouff, doing an info dump in the middle of a multiple-chapter scene is not the best. It slow downs the story a lot, you could do the info dump later

    Ch 19 Journey of the Stormlands (3)
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    Game of Thrones: House of Tarth
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ21h
    Commented

    We will know their potential soon huh... I'm hoping for a Silver Machoke, Gold Rhydon and Platinum Kadabra, but it most likely is Bronze-Silver-Gold...

    Ch 49 Chapter 48 : Harvest!
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics ¡ DemiGod_2972
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2d
    Replied to readerbecamewriter

    If Killer B is 10 years old, it is definetely too early. I would have waited for him to be at least 14-15 years old, already Chunin-Jonin levels. And even then, the 3rd Raikage is still alive, Hachibi's rival for a lot of years, who recently "won" the fight by sealing him again. Any person would be reluctant to follow orders of your rival/enemy and the true person responsible of your incarciration. Hachibi would have mellowed out more after 3rd Raikage's death, with his son A being more soft on Killer B and their sibling relationship.

    Ch 47 The Attack II
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2d
    Commented

    Hachibi shouldn't be so easily cooperating that early with Kumo. Before Killer B, he used to rampage, and even is the one responsible for the 3rd Raikage's self inflicted wound.

    Ch 47 The Attack II
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    Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ4d
    Commented
    Ch 35 Chapter 35
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    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ7d
    Commented

    No Calm mind?

    Kadabra, be sharp. You'll be the one providing support to Rhydon."
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics ¡ DemiGod_2972
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ8d
    Commented

    Ouff, wasn't he just a teen? A pity.

    'No...', Beef's last thoughts rattled in his lonesome head as the image of those golden irises with reptilian pupils reared its head once more.
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    Marvel : A Reptilian Adventure
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ8d
    Commented
    Chapter 34
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    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
    Book&Literature ¡ Basso2142
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ20d
    Commented

    If this really is a Death World, Healing moves like Rest and Recover are a must. Evasion/Defense as well

    Ch 41 Chapter 40 : The Grand Heist - First Attempt!
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics ¡ DemiGod_2972
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ26d
    Commented

    What about those Pokemon that don't evolve? They can't use the push of evolution to improve their talent. Another example of the disadvantages of the Talent System, it makes single stage Pokemon very non desirable, even if they were already unpopular IRL.

    Ch 38 Chapter 37 : Meaning behind the gift
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics ¡ DemiGod_2972
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ28d
    Commented

    I would have preferred a Gold (one stp to the highest Platinum) Pokemon tbh, as I can't grasp the value of what she gave her. This Abra must be High Gold/Platinum talent, due the spoons worth... If not, another Gold psychic Pokemon would have been better.

    Ch 37 Chapter 36 : Punishment? Gift?
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ1mth
    Replied to Ballad

    A Ralts please. Or two! I always liked the idea of having both a Gardevoir and Gallade hehe

    Ch 35 Chapter 34 : The Third Pokemon
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ1mth
    Commented

    Not a fan of Umbreon, not because of her species, but because she doesn't fit MC's hyper offensive team nor Author's writing style. Umbreon is a mixed defensive tank. Her offensive moves are lackluster, her abilities are useless, she is not the special attacker MC needs, she can't do crowd control, she doesn't excel on the typical role of Dark types (debuffer, become annoyances, disruptive)... The worst in my opinion, you author don't excel in describing Pokemon battles, and a defensive Pokemon that focuses on outlasting her opponents is not your style of writing battles either, as you usually go for brute force, without using tactics. At least she can be a Healer with Wish+Heal Bell. I prefer you don't give MC every Eeveelution, as it will overcrowd his already full team, that already aren't being given enpugh screentime and development.

    Ch 88 Eevee's evolution
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    Pokemon: Trainer SI
    Anime & Comics ¡ KK9494
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ1mth
    Commented

    So all the group of Clefairy, Chansey, Nidos, Jigglytuff and Munna will join the Breeding House? Maybe MC can make his Gym Fairy type, with other Pink-themed Pokemon to confuse people of their typing hehe

    Ch 87 First task completed
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    Pokemon: Trainer SI
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ1mth
    Commented

    Musharna in the games are lame, but "IRL", having a Psychic Pokemon that helps with sleeping must be a luxury. Even their abilities Telepathy, Synchronize and Forwarn are very useful, and can be expanded with Worldbuilding. In games they can't use Teleport, but Ally Switch should be useful enough to save its trainer/teammates life when needed.

    Ch 86 The Giant Moonstone and Clefairy tribe.
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ1mth
    Commented

    Hummm... it looks like Fairy might become his future gym's speciality 👀... Also get a Clefable/Clefairy for the main team! 3 of their 4 possible abilities are top tier Abilities: Magic Guard (cannot be damaged indirectly like poison, burn, hazards, Life Orb ), Unaware (ignores enemies stat boosts) and Clefairy's OP Friend Guard (allies receive only 75% of damage).

    Ch 85 Clefairy tribe
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    Pokemon: Trainer SI
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ1mth
    Commented

    Are abilities discovered here? You can add it next time.

    Ch 77 Trainer card
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ1mth
    Commented

    He needs Shadow Ball, Solar Beam, Swift, Zap Cannon to pair with Lock-On... and every Status move you can

    Moves: Tackle, Conversion 1, Conversion 2, Teleport, Protect, Light screen, Psychic, Psybeam, Recover, Lock-On, Signal Beam, Tri Attack.
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ1mth
    Commented

    He needs Taunt, Trailblaze, Sleep Talk, protect, Facade. And especially the moves Aerial Ace and Zen Headbutt to deal with Fighting types. Dark types also to deal with Ghosts like Throat Chop, Sucker Punch, Knock Off, Lash Out, etc.

    Moves: Yawn, Encore, Uproar, Endure, Focus Punch, Reversal, Counter, Rest, Thunder Punch, Fire Punch, Flame Thrower, Hyper Beam, Ice Punch, Mega Kick, Hammer Arm.
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ1mth
    Commented

    He needs Reflect, Detect, Rain Dance, Sleep Talk, Taunt, Signal Beam, Rock Slide, Psychic, Magnet Rise, Flash, Electroweb, Electric Terrain, Earthquake, Volt Switch... and even Teleport if you want to include a Gen2 Move tutor.

    Moves: Thunderbolt, Quick Attack, Thunder, Thunder Punch, Rest, Charge, Light Screen, Discharge, Brick Break, Low Kick, Focus Punch, Fire Punch, Flame Thrower, Endure, Counter, Protect, Wild Charge, Giga Impact.
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    Pokemon: Trainer SI
    Anime & Comics ¡ KK9494
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