What's up with the huge spaces between text? How come you refuse to respond to the comments regarding this? And for a guy who took down an entire criminal organization, had access to bombs, high grade technology, ect. he is incredibly stupid.

you're so corny bro, your reply gave me chills from the cringe.

which novel..?

Where's that from?

I imagine he's got like rainboots on, grey plaid boxers, and mario-like gloves. quite the fashion statement in my mind.

being a jack of all trades means you're able to be average in all categories, being a master of all is self-explanatory.

did you just morb?

what do you even mean?? who are you fighting? they said not every mc has to be an edgelord to op (who complains that he isn't being all edgy). unless we're not reading the same story, our imp here was not being an edgelord, how is defending the author and their work, not liking it? you're an imbecile.

this and your replies are just plain pathetic. I bet you have loads of experience with women with such astute observations and opinions.

are some of yall even reading at this point? quit skimming.

orphan's home... did you mean an orphanage?

this is so 198- I mean 1985.

of course you have an astolfo pfp, watched so much andrew tate you became gay. typical.

the whole point is sort term money, and even then it'd still be a luxury island once everything settles. your whole planet discovery thing makes no sense if you put "will," which means hasn't happened yet.

I don't know if you do this now, but I recommend using ' ' when a character is thinking. helps differentiate talking aloud and thinking without the need to clarify that they're not speaking out loud.

In the a** doesn't count.

I mean, it'd only make his death stylish. Imagine jumping and doing some flips as you scrap against the truck's top, in a beautiful yet disturbing firework of blood and guts, and he finishes it off with a splat onto the road.

LOL I like that one, gonna use that now.