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ASSBEYK

ASSBEYK

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I am a freelance writer and author since 2010. *I have a diploma : Advanced level Cambridge method. *I have obtained the IELTS exam with a B and was classified intermediate to advanced level

2021-09-03 JoinedAlgeria
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
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    Nora Smith was pregnant when a rich claimer was presented to her family. She gave birth to her child and became thin and a beautiful lady and found that the claimer was still waiting for her.But this time she seemed to appreciate him. The narrative style is perfect. There are many lively scenes. The characters are well described and incarnate well their roles. Good job!

    Ch 1 Returning With A Counterattack
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    She Becomes Glamorous After The Engagement Annulment
    General · Mr. Yan
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
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    Lily will get married due to an arranged business marriage by her mother. The humorous style is perfect. The dialogue is vivid. It is lively. Good job! You are gifted in this genre.

    Ch 1 Chen Lihua is left speechless.
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    Unpredictable Marriage.
    General · Paschalinelily
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
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    Rean had no interest in life and decided to die. However he regretted when being died and wanted to be reincarnated. The struggle was hard with death. The description is rich and there are lively scenes. The style is good. *The story turns around death and there are some redundancies. * There is a lack of some different events. Keep on it!

    Ch 1 Don't Wanna
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    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    The plot reveals a legendary story inspired from Asiatic culture. There are some personages that belong to another world and all is centered around a certain spiritual strength. The narrative style is good and there is a dialogue. There are many lively scenes. The story may get several events too. Keep on it!

    Ch 1 Xuanyi Mountain Sect
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    Invincible Uncle-Grandmaster
    Games · Nine Cuts
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
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    The plot is a vision of the city especially the university in the future, 500 years later. Many animals mutations would occur but some freshmen would remain and the selection of the citizenship would be linked to the best academy rank. The narrative style is mostly telling. There are some passages of dialogues too. The expressions are meant and there are lively scenes. It is an original plot that needs further events. Good job!

    Ch 1 Number One Mecha Major
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    Age of Mecha: Divine-grade Genetic Extraction
    Sci-fi · Low Temp 35°
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    The plot is about a big tour game that may cost cities destruction and lives. The narrative style is perfect and there is a big suspense. The reader wants to know more about the game. The description is rich and there are many lively scenes. It is written in a consistent language. It is an exciting adventure story.It is original too. Good job!

    Ch 1 Welcome to the Tower Defense Survival!
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    Tower Defense Survival: I Defend the Whole Country Alone!
    Fantasy · Alexender
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
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    The script is a revelation and a description of a killer master. There is no real plot based on some events and actions. In the same manner there is no dialogue. Some expressions should be improved and changed into other meant ones. *There are many details but there is no a structured story. Keep on it.

    Ch 2 Departure
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    Death Scripture
    Action · Cold Glamor
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    The legendary story reveals the bloody path of a certain sect. The narrative style is correct. There are lively scenes. * The plot is focal some different events may let it interesting to read. Keep on it!

    Looking towards the clear skies that held a light blue hue, Wei Wuyin shook his head. He lamented with pity in his eyes, "She's wasted on that fool. If she was with me…" a cold, callous smile couldn't help but tug at his lips. The glint in his eyes was dark, cruel, and lascivious. Licking his lips, he held out his palm.
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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern · KevinAscending
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
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    It is a legendary story inspired from Asia culture. The narrative style is perfect. I like the dialogue; it is vivid. There are lively scenes. The story fits children's literature too.

    Ch 1 The Day I Became A Fox Girl
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    Demonic CEO: Fluff Fluff Please Be My Pet
    Fantasy · invayne
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Replied to ShuaangSree01

    The story reveals a carrier fight if a spokeswoman. She got married to a boss to venge after loosing her job. The narrative style is perfect. There are many lively scenes. The characters incarnate well their roles. The story bears suspense. There is humour too. It is meant and there is a logic scheme of the chronological events. Good job!

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    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    · Webnovel Comics/Rose Studio
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    There are many descriptions and events that seen disparate. The expressions are not natural and a speech has been added and diesn't show a coherance in the script. The plot is not well emphasized inside this script. I think there is vengeance alone without the microprocessors of the story. Keep on it!

    Ch 1 Rebirth
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    The story is mostly a monologue. Someone was a king and lost his power in the modern contemporary life. It is a fiction story with an original plot. He decided to acquire new competencies and to lose weight. *The narrative style is correct but there is a monotony in the speech. There are lack of dialogues or some different actions. Keep on it!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: It’s like a drug
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    Race to The Throne
    Action · mrCat
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    The story is focused on a war against Zombies. The principal character is leading this war. The narrative style is sturdy and the description is rich. There are lively scenes indeed. *You may add some different actions so that to break down a certain thematic monotony.

    Ch 1 (EDT) Chapter 1
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    Dimensional Store System In Apocalypse
    Action · yanglin
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    The story is focused on the personage of Lu Zhou who is a poor student that thinks about how to earn money much than studying and fails. The narrative style is good. The expressions are meant. The description is rich and there are some lively scenes.It seems credible and reveals a student's university experience. Keep on it!

    Ch 1 Shocked! A Six-figure Job is Actually...
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    Scholar's Advanced Technological System
    Urban · Morning Star LL
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    When a human being can engulf enormous quantities of energy, he becomes a supernatural. The style is perfect and there are lively scenes. It is an original plot that synchronizes our contemporary technological era. Great original scifi story!

    Ch -1 Illustrations
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    It is an original fantesy piece. The style is perfect and the expressions are meant. I like the vivid dialogue between the different characters. There are lively scenes.

    Ch -1 Author's Notes
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    Red's First Love
    Fantasy · midnight_bloom
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    This is a great meant story. Mo Fan is a dunce student he hates studying. However, even though his failure in mathematics then in magic he wanted to pursue magic studies and refused the construction job offered by his father. The narrative style is perfect and I like the meant dialogue that is very philosophical and bear some human values. It is vivid and there are many lively scenes.

    Ch 1 Huge Changes to the World
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    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    The legendary short story reveals strength duality between men that thought to get in their body some energy starting from an Asiatic sect. The narrative style is perfect and the description is rich and there is some lively scenes. *Some violent scenes should stage the story at 18 and above.

    Ch -1 Character Illustrations
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    Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    A memorial place is here described with passion. It bears childhood memories indeed. It is a consistent entry to a long story. There is a rich description and lively imagery. The narrative style is good. The language is sturdy. *You have based your work on many descriptive details of one place.

    Ch 1 The Discovery
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    The Bridge
    Fantasy · Bruce_Hickman
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  • ASSBEYK
    ASSBEYK2yr
    Commented

    The plot is about a school of magic and many interactive links between students that may lead to some conflicts, jalousie and love. The story reminds me Happy Potter series. The style is perfect. There is many dialogues and the fiction story seems vivid and full of adventures. It is interesting to read especially those who like to wander in the magic world and it fits to be a movie or a cartoon.

    Soon the evil envious prince from the powerful Envy family couldn't take it anymore.
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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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