hmm, this is not a FF novel that I like, well maybe the author thinks that realistically telling stories will be good to read, but if it's for a FF novel, you are in the wrong place, the author would be better off not making an FF novel, but a novel with your own imagination, and Also, you should know what an FF Novel is, right?, while the FF novel you made is not called FF, but like your own novel which is locked in chapters like other novels (not FF)
and also I stopped reading this FF novel When the MC decides to become a Marine (or a noble's slave)