Comments of chapter undefined of Death, Devotion, Dissonance

As an OG reader I am staking my claim of superiority over all u noobs. I have returned to once again bask in author-san's works. (Author-san u better like this post or else....ಠ︵ಠ)

well, FKING WELL DONE AUTHOR, THIS IS ACTUALLY BETTER THAN THE OG STORY, the prologue is dang good, it is actually the revamped version of the og but, better and different? idk, since this is grimdark version of it, i expect mc to be a bit ruhless and has frequent action, or maybe u unintentionally might go to the slice of life grimdark version XD, anyway glad youre back,Aaaand im gonna grind these tickets now, nc prologue so far

Interesting first chapter. It comes across as mysterious and quirky. Hopefully we don't end up with odd and crazy.

well lets do this again

This is actually a great start to a story. Excellent prologue. Very mysterious and gave me just enough. I like this a lot.

awesome chapter

So far so good!

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This seems pretty interesting. Hope it lives up to the reviews :)

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Isn't the cover the same as the new cover for shades of the new world

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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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Can i call my self og if i only read 5 chapters of the og i dont remember why i dropped this novel i might have forgotten it because my library has a lot of novels i dropped because of premium and i have alot of novels to go have my fast pass on

I really like the concepts you've introduced so early on here instead of it being thrown at us in info dump style flashbacks lol. Also really good to see some proper planning and foreshadowing in place with some of the things mentioned. This is already feeling much more thoughtful, quality, and less messy than Shades, and I enjoyed that so good stuff 👍👍, really excited for this ^^

Oooh loving this first chapter! Very mysterious, certainly raises a lot of questions about the world they are in!

Great and interesting start!