lordastrea
11/4 Apologies for chapter delays. Been extremely sick the past week. A total recluse who likes writing about demihumans in fantasy worlds.
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lordastrea2yrReplied to AlvernCh 34 Fox and Wolf- lordastrea2yrCommented
Just wanted to say that I am thoroughly enjoying this so far. Honestly, I don't usually get into webnovels that much. I enjoy reading published books and holding them in my hand. But this story has my full attention. I feel that Nero's standoffish/blunt personality actually reached a level that seemed justified because of the bits we are given about his past and the beginning trials of this story. Sometimes it is pretty intense! Lol. World-building is fantastic. It is fed at what I believe is an appropriate pace and not given as info dumps or lengthy exposition. I like that Nero is strong but has plenty of room to grow. This story is solid. I'll have to use part of this for my review in the future, I guess. Lol. I ended up babbling a bit. Great work.
Ch 13 Brown Eyed Girl - lordastrea2yrCommented
Oh, nice way to add this tidbit of information
'Don't talk to me about the Dawn Clan, from what I hear the whole bunch of you will be nameless before too long.' Looking past the girl, the boy once again turns his attention my way. 'Sir, does anything take your fancy? For potions of this quality, you won't find better prices than here.' - lordastrea2yrReplied to Harold_Sylvhir
I've never played Genshin. XD
"Well, it's a quick detour if you're up for it. You'll be entering the capital from the west gate, I reckon. All you have to do is deliver the message to the guard post. The guys there will know what to do with it when they see the name. I've offered this simple quest to three other parties and they all turned it down. Three! Catherine and I were absolutely baffled. Oh, Catherine is the woman out front by the way. I can't give you a signature for the full rewards, but I can hold onto it until your guild is official. Just keep it on the low. I'm not supposed to have a backlog of that sort." - lordastrea2yrReplied to Clone_v2
Thanks for commenting. Normally, I would have used italics as I originally intended, but for some reason Inkstone doesn't have that. I find that perplexing since it is such a basic formatting tool. I considered the single inverted comma for thoughts, but then I wasn't sure if it would be confusing since I needed to use them when I specifically refer to the stats and such. I didn't want it to be confusing, so I ended up using more dialogue indicators for thoughts (I honestly hate overusing dialogue indicators). I'm glad you left this comment, because now I feel better about using a single inverted comma for thoughts now. I would probably have to leave dialogue indicators, but the commas could serve to emphasize a thought. Thanks again.
"Fucking move," he said aloud this time. - lordastrea2yrCommented
Good answer. :)
'All the best people are.' She replies.