Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

I vote for Hermione, for God's sake Emma Watson, in addition to her personality being very similar to the MC, they both love magic.

Thanks for the chapter! Now that you explained the need of Iris because Harry's new personality, it totally makes sense! BTW what is his mother family? I don't remember if you explained them? Are they french pureblood? I'm very happy you are going for complex-Dumbledore instead of evil! Bashing is the worst, tbh. You're really nailing this HP fic in my opinion!

For pairings, dont really see the point until he’s a fourth year. Hope he focuses on himself, and exploring the world. Do ***** things, sleep with a veela go meet the Vampires, invent new branches of magic. Perform rituals and study the dark arts. Become a druid, bend the elements to your will. Time travel back into the olden days of camelot, meet morgana and merlin. visit grindelwalds cage and throw a biscuit at him.

I'm fine with any pairing as long as it's not Daphne... I'm sick of her fanon 'Ice Queen' personality, way too overused at this point. IDK why the pairing is so popular in fanfiction, when she's barely even mentioned as a background character in the books...

I think Hermione fits more with Quinn with her love for magic, it also helps that my celebrety crush is Emma Watson so there's that, but it also depends on the personality of your OC character. Also if Arcturus dies does the House Black goe to Draco or to Sirius?

I don't like the development of the MC's extreme abhorrence to his wand. I think it would be better for him to use it while using the RoR to continue his training in wandless/focus less magic. like he could learn spells wandlessly and train them to a usable level & use his wand in classes

I vote for a slightly younger Nymphadora Tonks (maybe a year or two older than MC, instead of being 6th year when he starts Hogwarts)! She is talented and is metamorphomagus. And with the Black family not having a clear suitable heir... You can make the MC plot or help her negociate, idk hehe #TeamTonks

Hermione and OC

Really... From start I have wondered why he is going all superspy with his wandless magic. If he just showed his skill or asked for help, he would have most likely got an tutor and books way earlier. Not to mention he wouldn't have to hide, which he does for some absurd reason. I mean reasoning has not even been discussed and there was not even single attempt to ask for help or books on magic until he went to steal his sister's book. Come on.

As always I thank you for the chap author-san. Finally, his first year is coming!! But I have some questions : Are you gonna focus a lot on his schooling or are you gonna skim through them? Is he gonna have oc or original characters as friends? Well if you keep writing like this I won't be disappointed, that's for sure. Hope you're having a great week author-san See ya next chap

Luna

You're A talented writer. thanks for the chapter

I can just imagine how much hate Snape has because HP's dad is still alive.

MC x Fleur, i know that it's your original plan author, make it happen!

#teamTonks +1

plz don't put Oc in Hufflepuff & Slytherin

Yo dumbledore ahs 5 votes?

Now I remembered why I stopped reading this story

honestly it would have been best if he was more ruthless, cunning and manipulative. I'm basically reading diary of some child.