Kurotora
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Just a guy that likes to read.
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Kurotora19hCommenteddon't do it
Inside the office, Bryan sat in contemplation, pondering his next move. He did not readily accept or decline Dumbledore's request, instead informing the Headmaster that he needed time to consider the matter.- Kurotora19hCommented
Headmaster *
"Thank you very much for your concern, Principal Dumbledore," Bryan cautiously refused to say a word, "It is the task entrusted to me by the school board to catch the attacker of the attack, and I have to be serious about my work. As well as the safety of the little wizards, I will not leave my post without permission until the culprit surfaces." - Kurotora19hCommented
Headmaster *
"Good evening, Principal Dumbledore, I hope I didn't disturb you," Bryan nodded, "I heard from Professor Snape that you seem to have something to discuss with me." - Kurotora19hCommented
monitoring the school*
Fred and George haven't been very happy recently. Ever since they learned about Mr. Watson's methods of monitoring the academy, the two of them didn't dare to wander around the castle unscrupulously at night, because although Mr. Watson seemed to be a very talkative person, it didn't mean he could endure repeated provocations. - Kurotora19hCommented
you need to fix the section that reads "I don't even know what being mean means" it doesn't make much sense. I think you forgot a word or two.
"Are you crazy, Harry!" Ron exclaimed, surprised by Harry's response. "Didn't you hear what Fred and George said? Bryan was secretly monitoring everyone without prior notice. If such a violation isn't stopped, I don't know what being mean means anymore. And besides, I think Fred and George might have been manipulated or under some sort of control, finding such behavior funny." - Kurotora19hCommented
why do you keep using the phrase "little wizards"? you can just all them students every person in that school 17 & under is a student
With curfew time yet to arrive, there were still a few little wizards wandering around the castle. However, Harry and Ron had already donned the invisibility cloak. As they walked, their eyes occasionally glanced up at the ceiling, as if sensing hidden eyes watching them. - Kurotora20hCommented
had Charms*
On Tuesday morning, Gryffindor's fourth-year class had Spellcasting with Professor Flitwick. They were learning the Laughter Charm—a spell that brought happiness. - Kurotora1dCommented
Gryffindor House
"There are many other facts that I can't ignore, for example, I can't figure out if Salazar Slytherin wants to find himself an heir, why do you have to pick from Gryffindor College. - Kurotora1dReplied to FicFrenzy
no problem
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Parvati * there are 2 Patil's at Hogwarts Parvati is in Gryffindor her twin sister Padma is in Ravenclaw
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Cornish pixies*
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that Hermione was still*
At this time, Harry noticed the uneasy staring eyes. He glanced at him out of the corner of his eye, and found that it was Neville who was looking at him, hesitant to speak, so he immediately knew what Neville was concerned about, but he couldn't tell Neville and Hermione were still in the hospital treating the beautiful black hair on her face, so Harry quickly put his head down and pretended to be interested in the silver spoon on the plate. - Kurotora2dCommented
binoculars *
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fourth year summer* before his fifth year*
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yeah no
Bryan casually closed the door and entered the warm room. Carved windows faced Hagrid's hut and the Forbidden Forest, offering a faint glimpse of the Quidditch pitch.