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Zemophobia2mthCommentedI almost barfed inside my mouth at that line.
'Can I tell her... about tonight? Will she judge me?'- Zemophobia2mthCommented
That's because many authors 'force the plot' and have the characters make decisions they wouldn't make in reality.
'I had liked him from the start... even when he was a stupid fool... yet why did I throw tantrums or push him away?' - Zemophobia2mthCommented
I'm pretty sure more than two people died, but I guess he doesn't see 'men' as people.
A gun formed with the resolve never to forget his past mistakes and naivety, marking the day of two tragic victims' deaths due to his failure and marking the day when Seth Darkwood vowed that his past self died. - Zemophobia2mthCommented
This guy is a very bad shot with a gun.
The dog fell after the fifth shot as his pistol became useless without ammo; he needed to find a way to create more bullets once this side story was done and over, but right now, he was tired and annoyed. - Zemophobia2mthCommented
No, firing a loud gun in the middle of the night is doing that.
'This fucker is bringing more trouble!' - Zemophobia2mthCommented
It's easy for cringe pick-up lines like that to work when you're the most handsome man in the world.
"Maybe... Or it's because I want to seem that way in front of a lovely woman like you." - Zemophobia2mthCommented
Who says, "urinate" themselves? Has anyone every said that in RL?
'It seems we should call it quits after a little more; otherwise, my princess might urinate herself.' - Zemophobia2mthCommentedCh 7 I Am Here!
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That was another banger of an ending for the chapter.
[Tainted a virgin nurse's mind - now she will hope that all men be like you naked and be forever disappointed: +10 VP] - Zemophobia2mthCommented
But the author was the one that decided not to make her a harem member. Something I find hard to believe when said MC already had a harem.
There was no mention of her in the novel after that, likely because they regarded her as a non-heroine, so the author discarded her. - Zemophobia2mthCommented
Then how is this character an antagonist? Only mobs die in one chapter.
He discovered, to his dismay, that he had assumed the role of the novel's antagonist, a character doomed to meet his demise in the second chapter. - Zemophobia2mthCommented
Ah, so the author is too lazy to develop the MC's character?
[But the system will stop you from suffering PTSD, Extreme Stress and mental duress when needed.] - Zemophobia2mthCommented
What? I thought she also crashed and hit a car.
[She was the one that tried to resuscitate you...] - Zemophobia4mthCommentedCh 4 Chapter4-A Level 1 Antagonist? Discerning the Protagonist!
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Oh, so rent is the same is this parallel world where an apocalypse happened?
His mother worked hard for both of them, but their house rent took up 90% of her income. - Zemophobia8mthCommented
I'm just wondering how he didn't accidently use them when he 'woke up.'
'I will find a job where I can use my super strength.' - Zemophobia8mthCommented
This guy sounds like a nerd.
Rudy and Rize had a bad relationship. They often called each other out to humiliate themselves. Rize was frustrated and angry with Rudy since the first day of school when Rudy called her out to point out her mistake. However, it turned out she wasn't wrong, and Rudy was forced to apologize to her. - Zemophobia8mthReplied to Deeznuts69_
The author seems to gloss over a lot of the details.
'This is the last period. I can't wait to go home and meet my mother. It has been years since I last saw her.'