Dr.Boom
Itβs just kinda not good. I mean what else do you expect from a copy cat. Honestly, the so called magic is just cultivation with different names here. Even using phrases like uplifting mountains and overturning seas typically used in Eastern novels. Also the translation... Considering the trial reads took almost an extra week to come out, someone didnβt do their job. The translations suck this week.
Extremly bad novel Writing- It's just bad and has a dire need for editing. The Mc's name changes 10 times in a single chapter Story- Well...there is none. Mc spends 3 decades in a library and does nothing. Characters- All bland and boring. No descriptions or anything. The characters are just faceless humans World- So far nothing. Just that the Mc lives in a Kingdom and that there are more. All in all, a extremly bad and boring novel. Don't use your coins or FP's for this novel. It's really not worth it
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usually, I don't write a review for a novel unless I read it to more than a hundred chapters at least and reading the raws. But I must tell you that this time it's completely different. this is the worst novel in the history o Webnovel that has been translated. I must tell you that this is 100% MTL translated and it has been barely edited. the language and comprehension of this novel are truly difficult because it's been written by an underage kid. the Author doesn't even know the most basic form of writing a novel and just copy the other ones, but because the ones that he copied are martial novels that caused this novel to become shit. he doesn't know about magic and mage and written a magic novel. there are countless number o problems in just so many chapters. what is the meaning of even choosing this novel to translate? I Think Webnovel must delete even the original novel on the Chinese site. existence of this novel is the greatest insult to all of the readers.
Hey, What the hell Is he really a Mc A 36 Year Old Guy having a *** with 16 Year Old Girl Hey do you have any common sense, Mc is normal, if he is abnormal or a villain type it would be okay But you made him like a righteous guy, what are you trying to prove here Use some common knowledge Man You tell me you are 23 Years Old and if anyone tell you to have *** with 3 Years Old The person who told you would be a retard and the person who did it is a Worse than Retard he should have Mental Illness Shit Man you removed the complete taste from the story Fuck, Damn you go and Fuck yourself piece of shit.
The book was really good till 245 after that is sucks i couldnβt even read 10 chapters after that i dropped it after 253 the story before 245 and after it aas like the author is out of ideas to continue the story so wanted to start with a clean page so he showed that the MC is creating his inner world if it was for a few chapters then I might have had a motivation to continue but i donβt think it is completed even now. Finally if this stupid arc Ends and the real story continues can someone ping the character where it restarts here.
Stay away from this nonsense. It has a similar setting to those sign in novels where MC signs in, grows stronger, enemy comes, he beats, rinse and repeat. Just one of those power fantasy novels, and there's nothing wrong with that. Granted it's amongst the worse of the sign in novels I've read. Translation quality is absolutely awful and inconsistent, but still readable. Frankly I find a lot of those highly rated original novels and fanfictions in webnovel to be a lot more of a pain to read. Yet they still are very popular with people praising its grammar and English, god knows why. I digress, the reason why I've stressed to stay away from this novel is that starting at chapter 245, the story completely changes. I've seen some reviews warning of this before reading and thought it couldn't be that bad, boy was I wrong. It's as if you're reading a completely new novel that has no relevance to the older chapters at all. Only similarity is the MC's name. MC's personality seems different, all the other characters from the previous chapters are gone, it's a completely new world. The translation also got worse. So stay clear of this novel. I think it could be a somewhat fun and brainless read up till chapter 244 if that's your thing, but from then onwards it's just a completely new story that's just worse. I don't think there even was a "signing in" plot device anymore, though I could be wrong on that, may appear further on. So yeah, heed my warning. I can't stress enough that it's a completely new novel from chapter 245 onwards. I don't know if it returns back to the original story, but the way it was all handled is enough to convince me to stop reading.
This was a decent read up until Chapter 245. The author pretty much throws away the previous worlds and characters in the span of a couple sentences. The story then continues with brand new characters and plot, all without explaining what happened. His wives are just gone from the story and aren't mentioned again. It is basically a completely different story from Chapter 245 on.
"eliminating noble factions and changing the world" seriously, not another Isekai SJW who will care about peasants more than about his cultivation. WN can we please get someone who is at least ~20% similar to Fang Yuan? I am sick of this righteous path bullsh*t, I came for magic, not for a revolution