The book is great. It's somewhat refreshing and new from all the other books on the same genre. However, I must say, the speed or pace of the character's movement is fast and somewhat lacking in my opinion. I am not saying that the fast pace is bad but I'm infering to content. You know, the satisfaction of reading that part of a story that accelerates the time. Anyway, the book can be better and it is great.[img=recommend]

What happeened to the sister of the archer? Where is he?

gaudete (rejoice)

i only have one question that makes this story perfect for me... is this a mature book for adults? i really want to see shen tian build his family.....

he loose conciousness too much.....

hes a complete idiot. doesnt he learn thingss?

i think tilly's father is the aide of nia that resulted in her having the jewel heart and death of tilly's mother.

The chapter and book is great. I need more than this.....

yeah. tnx

um

The story at the beginning was great however, i felt that the pace was too fast. His story.and school was not told at the first few chapters content wise, its good.

where are you now

yeah. feisty

great chapter. thanks

Amazing Book. Just the right book I've been looking for. Fluff and Intense Emotion. Clearly portrays the hardship of finding the right and the one. Characters are great and had a nice pace. Recommended for light readers and LGBT fans.

what a cliff

The book had a great start. I was't sure at the beginning but the peologuw shiwed the greatest enemy in the future. It is still a mystery how Razak came to be but I can say that the character is solid. While the characters are great, the little worldbuilding is a fact for me. Magic is Diverse but the Spells are somewhat redundant.I don't know if change is needed but the story is still Great. Good Work!!

Quite lacking really. You've created a diverse magic classifications however, the spells are redundant . You should try and make the characters creative in magic.

cut off from smutt huhu

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