Tonyluis
first five chapters is so heavy on politics, despite politics is not my taste but I genuinely like the way you write and building this world. Writing quality is well "I can see some basic mediocre" , the cause could be you were writing way too ahead of your hand so Maybe you should spend time to fixies wixies a bit. World building to real world for around 80% and i must say this is a true medieval fantasy in both writing and world too.
One killed by all and all by one ... It denotes the great power that produces the thirst for revenge and the contained anger has a silent strategy that defeats its enemies ... What a narrative, I was immersed in the dialogues and descriptions, I like the way the plot expands and its scenes and very rich stories unfold. I recommend reading ...
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