Review Detail of nomanlike in The Medieval Legend (an aquatic struggle)

first five chapters is so heavy on politics, despite politics is not my taste but I genuinely like the way you write and building this world. Writing quality is well "I can see some basic mediocre" , the cause could be you were writing way too ahead of your hand so Maybe you should spend time to fixies wixies a bit. World building to real world for around 80% and i must say this is a true medieval fantasy in both writing and world too.