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BrewingFantasies

BrewingFantasies

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Inspired from a lot of people.

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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies3d
    Replied to Shreya_Jagtap

    They're swapped reviews and fake stars, though I wonder why would one create such image if themselves when they've no intention of improving!?

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    A Slave To My Vengeful Lover
    Teen · AnnaMark
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies4d
    Commented

    Missing dialogue here, I guess?

    "You're not fine. Listen to you. You can't even talk!" The woman stated. Reaching for a jug of water, she undid the cap and held it to Tyler's lips.
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    Realm of Nimair
    Fantasy Romance · the_tea_pan
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  • BrewingFantasies
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    Commented

    Such realistic depiction!

    She wanted so badly to end the suffering they both were enduring, and the only way she knew how was to wake up. She screamed louder and louder for what seemed an eternity until finally, she jolted herself awake.
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    Realm of Nimair
    Fantasy Romance · the_tea_pan
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  • BrewingFantasies
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    Replied to Virus_Writing

    15 being marriage-able age doesn't mean the kids were adults, that too a century or so ago.

    This mortal, who finally reached the age of 15, is now an adult and qualified to enter a sect. Thus, he decided to apply for a third-rate sect, the Feather Wind Sect located in the Phoenix Kingdom.
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    Primordial Cultivator
    Eastern Fantasy · Idczhen
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies5d
    Commented

    On cloud nine*

    Man~ her lips were so soft that I felt like I was in cloud nine.
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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • BrewingFantasies
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    Posted

    [Reviewed on: 15-06-2021] *Glimpse of initial chapters.* GOOD POINTS: - Likeable MC - Not extremely poverty stricken, MC has some saving and stuff to support himself - Weak to strong trope is executed well - MC can think, he observes and doesn't go round being bullied physically (verbally, yes) - You don't have to cringe because MC is dumb, because he isn't - Expect beasts, Qi cultivation, maybe realms too, and lots of action - Some realistic elements are also depicted because we spot corruption, injustice, torture, bullying, conspiracies too WEAKNESS: - The narration style is highly 'telling' rather than 'showing' - Author's omnipresent tone is everywhere, which gave lesser screen and insights to the character - Readable novel, though there are tense fluctuations - Some information is repeated, such as chapter 2 and 3 has repeated info about Meng Yan.

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    Primordial Cultivator
    Eastern Fantasy · Idczhen
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  • BrewingFantasies
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    Posted

    [Reviewed on: 15-06-2021] Okay! - Never put emotes in novels, ffs it is prose writing! - The sentence structures are not readable - Poorly written, dialogues and descriptions are merged - The speaker's voice is fused with the description, that it's hard to track whether it's a dialogue or soliloquy - I couldn't go past the initial half of the 1st chapter - Author needs to edit from the scratch!

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    Snake Evolution System [ Legend Of Hebi]
    Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies6d
    Commented

    You know too much, duh! Stalker alert?

    "Sakamaki-kun has always been like this." Tomose said.
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    Soul for a Girlfriend?
    Realistic Fiction · lon_okami
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies6d
    Commented

    Could see*

    I reached my school on time today and sat down in my usual spot. Lilith followed me to my school. Turns out no one can see Lilith except me.
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    Soul for a Girlfriend?
    Realistic Fiction · lon_okami
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies6d
    Commented

    Earlier you said he was an adult at 15, duh!?

    But he failed to enter because his age was too young and because he did not have enough money to pay for the entry fee.
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    Primordial Cultivator
    Eastern Fantasy · Idczhen
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies6d
    Commented

    Duh? He was a child and of course helpless, how could he even save his parents? This is absurd.

    His parents gave birth to him but he allowed their death to happen without being able to do anything. He hated himself for being weak and powerless, so he decided to become a cultivator.
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    Primordial Cultivator
    Eastern Fantasy · Idczhen
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies6d
    Commented

    15 and adult, you serious?

    This mortal, who finally reached the age of 15, is now an adult and qualified to enter a sect. Thus, he decided to apply for a third-rate sect, the Feather Wind Sect located in the Phoenix Kingdom.
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    Primordial Cultivator
    Eastern Fantasy · Idczhen
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies8d
    Commented

    Haha, you bish! xDD

    "I think my leg slipped..."
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    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • BrewingFantasies
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    Commented

    I hate this brat

    "This is our best middle school student, Endric Oslov. He awakened an A-grade bloodline that allows him to warp space to his will!" Principal Will explained, "It's like the combination of telekinesis, gravity, and part spatial abilities... lest I forget, from the age of eight, his bloodline was already channeled through the four points making him the youngest Zulu ranked in the history of mixed blood!" Principal Will added.
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    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies9d
    Commented

    WHO IS THE GUY AT THE LAST?

    Ch 6 Bloodline Channeling
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    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • BrewingFantasies
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    Posted

    [Reviewed on: 12-06-2021] GOOD POINTS: - Comical vibe through the chara of female demon/devil - MC is reasonably smart, not too dumb to cringe at all - The flow and pace is fine too - Apparently there are no issues in grammar [will explain further below] - Storyline somewhat resembles 'my pick up artist system' but no it's not a fanfic - MC has a goal to achieve or he will die - At first it gave me 'death note' vibe, then the devil felt a succubus to me as she emerged - It was entertaining~ WEAKNESS: - Synopsis doesn't really tells what's inside, it should be more elaborative on the contract aspect - The initiative strategy in chapter 1 is extremely wrong - No one wants to read the routine of MC, his house, work, what he is wearing, food, etc - The narration is in personal/1st person but the repetition of 'I' is annoying, in about five lines 'i' is overly used seven times! - 1st chapter should have begun by the later half, the upper half is completely dump in my opinion. Since 2 and 3rd chapters are without fillers and absolutely good with hooks, while 1st [initial half] is a turn off. - Devil can read his mind but at places she doesn't respond to his thoughts, why?

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    Soul for a Girlfriend?
    Realistic Fiction · lon_okami
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies10d
    Commented

    Great start! 🔥

    Ch 2 Unknown Man
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    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies14d
    Commented

    Good chapter! A perfect blend of magic, combat and little romance.

    Ch 6 Emilia
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    The Adventure Addict
    Fantasy · Kakashi_PCB
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  • BrewingFantasies
    BrewingFantasies14d
    Commented

    He can barely walk due to his broken legs, how can he dig a hole? >.>

    Leon found a nice spot under the tallest tree under the forest, right outside the monument and dug a hole just deep enough to bury his friends. He dragged his friends and covered back the hole. After finding some flowers and laying them on the grave and marking it with sticks and some rocks, the now exhausted Leon crawled his way back to the Xert village. As he was about to lose consciousness again on the path to the Xert entrance, one of the villagers coming back from the fields spotted him and worriedly ran up to him. She was shouting something, but it just sounded like muffled noises to Leon who lost consciousness eventually as soon as he saw that he was finally safe.
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    The Adventure Addict
    Fantasy · Kakashi_PCB
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  • BrewingFantasies
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    Commented

    You are lucky*

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    The Adventure Addict
    Fantasy · Kakashi_PCB
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