Reviews of DEADIE

Hi , I am a newbie author .If you find any mistakes , kindly tell me or highlight it . The novel is being proof read. I would try to publish error free chaps. Even if any mistake is left ,bear with it. Xoxo ❤️🤗.

To be honest your book are amazing and wonderful dear author you are an amazing writer who one in a million best book are been liked by me I usually don't really read these kind of books but I give it a try and I was amazed with the talent and words that are in it it touches my heart and that I really loved it right now I am running out of words that I don't know what to say I will say I rate this novel 100% of all my time that I could ever do I did my best to rate it to the best keep it up🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖 and continue to achieve perfection and all the best in the future thank you very much yours sincerely Vanessa dowlatram thank you very much for letting me comment on your book 😀😀😀🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖

firstly, i love the back and forth between Insha and Shaams in the first chapter. OMG so great😌👍 The word usage, description and pacing of the story was 10/10 Strongly suggest you read it😊👍

A great book with well defined storyline, finely thought out concept, intricately designed characters with individual personalities, solid world building with a firm base, consists of mystery, action, magic twists and turns, romance, thrill, uncertainty and furthermore gives off dramatic effects! Thoroughly enjoyed!

This plot is unique and intriguing, You built a solid world and i like how descriptive it is. The first chapter was good, it made me crave for more. Althought there is only few chapters is not early to say that this story has potential. keep up the good work

The story is unique and captivating. It made me got hooked immediately. With talent and skills, this story will become something in the future! by the way, I am from review swap....Congrats and good luck!

[img=update] Hey I have been waiting for this. I hope you would update more chapters soon. I really like the story plot but do not know who will be the winner. Insha is a strong opponent. I really hate weak female lead. Yep I hope that you would continue to update soon. I am an avid reader. Hope you would not mind frequently updating. More power to you.

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this story feels so real and it is well written! it has me hooked already and i want to keep reading. the author did a great job in creating this story

"Picturesque". The author did really well in writing a visually attractive novel. Not too flowery, not too complicated descriptions made it easy to read. I love it! Thanks for sharing your story, author!

well, that was something unexpected from a book well underviewed with 35k views- being bit descriptive, this story is really nicely elaborated with it's every ends meeting the crave of the reader. I really loved this story and will look forward to read it.

Interesting read. For me first time reading about phoenix aspect. Wonder where it would lead? The names also pick the initial chuck making it more intriguing.

I've found your story very refreshing, it has picturesque scenes, the way you were able to write it off is fascinating. In terms of the personality of characters, they all are very unique, unlike the usual wooden-block ones.

Wow I am finding it hard to describe your work. It's really mesmerizing. I have already fallen for characters. The way you have described them giving unique speech, connects the reader to the characters. The descriptions, plots are simply amazing. The content is well planned. Your hard work is clearly visible. Good luck with your work author!! And those who like fantasy-romance, I strongly recommend them to add this book to their library just like I did😉

G'day mate. This book is pretty good, kept me hooked reading it. Good characters and world building. If you are thinking about reading this book, I would suggest that you give it a try :)

From the very beginning the novel takes reader's heart by most proper quality of writing, and the naturality of dialogues. The characters are built steadily, and share their secrets at a pleasant exciting rate. This is a book for any romance coneisseur, and as I'm not of such, I can only tell it as good, and that is saing much, as it leaved me in high spirits. (as I said I'm no romance fan) In my opinion the world development could be more frequent, but I understand love takes the first violin. I really appreciate the handiwork of writer, and look forward as writes something more of mine liking. (as main topic, I liked that novel, just it's not my stik.) I haven't graded stability of updates as I don't know about them. Hope U found that review usefull. (just graded it anyways, coz couldn't post, but the total score is the same.)

It's a great book. Fairly detailed and of high level English and has a great storyline as well. Good luck Author and I can't wait for more.

This book is intriguing & unique...Very promising characters...I read a few chapters and it showed a mixture of magic, mystery, love, action, cliffhangers and many more...there are a few errors which can be fixed by the author...highly recommended book...Great work, Author!

Great start, really enjoyed reading this novel. MC is likable and humourous. The world background is creative and imaginative and the descriptions add to the story. The flow of the story is great, keep up the great work author! I will look forward to ur updates.

A well described story of kingdoms and princesses and princes. With a past full of crossroads, between personal plots. Magic is the part that makes the story special. Be extravagant, beautiful and powerful. Be Charismatic, Galán and Intuititvo, What Characters! Prose and poetry of kingdoms, kings and princesses that delight the eyes that read and the hearts that dream of living like this.