The chapters are short and much fun to read. I highly reccomend the story to almost any1. All is well written, seasoned with good plot, and dialogues, which seem much of nattural.

Great lecture! I think it deserve 4.9 stars tho don't have the possibility to grade so. This is a story for any1 interested in good war themed action novel. Even I, which am not such, found it pleasant to read!

The story soakes your soul from the first three chapters! I appreciate all good stuff in that novel. Although writing could be a bit better, temper your style, good luck!

The plot is awesome! Man just wants to read, and read, will propably be a great hit in the future. I can make a statement, that it's a book for everybody.

I also had much fun writing of these. Thanks for comments!

Thanks for praise!

As not a big fan of the games genre, I found the lecture entertaining anyways - really liked the race choice scene, and the reportage-like begining. In my opinion will suit U if only got a gamer's vein. I haven't graded stability of updates only adjusted general grade by using it. Found your novel very pleasant to read, but some grammar forms didn't suit well. Hope U found my review usefull. Keep on and it will be a hit in it's genre!

From the very beginning the novel takes reader's heart by most proper quality of writing, and the naturality of dialogues. The characters are built steadily, and share their secrets at a pleasant exciting rate. This is a book for any romance coneisseur, and as I'm not of such, I can only tell it as good, and that is saing much, as it leaved me in high spirits. (as I said I'm no romance fan) In my opinion the world development could be more frequent, but I understand love takes the first violin. I really appreciate the handiwork of writer, and look forward as writes something more of mine liking. (as main topic, I liked that novel, just it's not my stik.) I haven't graded stability of updates as I don't know about them. Hope U found that review usefull. (just graded it anyways, coz couldn't post, but the total score is the same.)

Hmm... I never would consider a talking marble a great artifact, especially if it claimed so.