nishidurani
I think this story has a really interesting concept and the characters also seem to have a lot of potential. However, regarding the writing, there are a lot of simple mistakes that make the story a little hard to read at times. The world the author has created is pretty unique, and I am looking forward to seeing where the author takes this story. Best of luck with your writing author ^u^
Ok, so I was always fascinated with fairytales. Have you remembered the "princess and the frog" story. I am going to write my modern version of this story. A fairy was cursed to be which and live with humans until she a tome her sins. But we're saving a life is really a sin or has she started a new journey of life. Hope you enjoy it as much as you enjoyed my other books.