I think this story has a really interesting concept and the characters also seem to have a lot of potential. However, regarding the writing, there are a lot of simple mistakes that make the story a little hard to read at times. The world the author has created is pretty unique, and I am looking forward to seeing where the author takes this story. Best of luck with your writing author ^u^
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