Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter, Monkey King Campione(Being reworked)

bah a campione is made to be overpowered there are only a few beings who can even hurt the guy dude, and the powers of the great sage are far tooooooooooooooooooooo much though the jade emperor can't even defeat him only at most equal him

1st, the Black Copper Cross or whatever it’s name is, is based in Italia. They have no business being in China for a heretic god, as there is already a Campione there. It’s even surprising nobody from China Magical Association tried to talk to him before his departure. 2nd, The British Isles have their own magical association, with the sickly witch whose name I forgot. She should have been the one to contact him. Also, the headquarters of these associations tend to be in major cities, not a small ride away from the Weasley town. 3rd, I hope you won’t make the goblet able to bind him against his will. If Devils can’t bind Campiones, these measly cup couldn’t either. It should require his approval, just like Rias contract. 4th, since you decided to add demi-gods, they shouldn’t be solely from the greek pantheon. There are the celtics and asgardians nearby. Maybe have some descendants of demi-gods in Hogwart (Luna, Daphne, perhaps even the founders...)

Pretty sure you cant bind Campione’s on contracts or everybody would be doing it.

Please dont make him enter Triwizard tournament, he's fucking Campione not some witty icky wizard to play games.. Make her help Fleur maybe, considering her heritage and loneliness to face this tournament alone because she is Veela..

Awesome so far! Will Rias introduce Harry to the rest of her peerage?

Would be interesting if Salazar became a Heretic God to test Harry, resulting in Harry winning and gaining some interesting authorities related to Healing and Barriers, maybe able to summon his own Basilisk?

Hmm. This is better than I thought. Hope his friends get better, or he'll throw them away. Because "Harry, where have you been" and the constant moralizing and envy are really annoying. Now Harry is not limited to communication only with them and should see the difference.

I love the story so far including the fact that the Gods are Heretic gods that reformed the Phanteons i assume that they became similar to susanno in the source material and are relative sane

thanks. more. plus since he's more intelligent, he could try going over what his family has. especially after he gets chosen for the tournament. since fanfic or not, being able to enter a death tournament should make one a legal *****.

Verethragna +1

i Hope u will get ron to gtfo from harrys life after goblet od fire stuff

Will this be a harem?

thanks for the chapters as for the thing about people asking for including other abilities of sun wukong to Harry is that some of them are just too useful. take a look at transformation and fiery gaze for example. although it's not that powerful combat wise, it's very versatile while not making MC too OP I personally wanted the fiery gaze to check something tho. I think Dumbledore's action are kinda sus. i think he's the imposter 😱😱😱

okay Ron but as far as I know Hermione had never betrayed Harry, she always supported him, so why the **** are you changing her?

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter, and I have trust and whatever you have planned, I’m sure Henry will get plenty strong without other abilities from sun Kong

Thx for the chapter

xp

cool

really like story and hope you continue right till the end with it