Reviews of Harry Potter(being rewritten visit new version.)

as I am the author .I need the rating to be at 5.0 .so i will give myself that.But you guys can be honest in the rating and review.I continue the story till it is complete.I am thinking of a ch range of 100-150 at the least.

Like it nice.keep up the work.Try some harem including ntr andromeda and amelia. Hurry up to Hogwarts alread. All the best Author. byeeeeeee

Why does MC get sad/mad about his new parents death... they are complete strangers. MC is so full of angst its too cringe ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

not really used to giving reviews before 20th chapter... but I'm in a mood for it. as something that could be improved, it would be the spacing between some dialogues on some chapters. for the story so far...quite good as it makes sense. tho I still consider this as an AU after the MC came to be. And the canon would only be for the background info before the MC existed. Since everything changed when he existed on that timeline. Not much of a complain from me since I still wish that someone would finish their HP fanfic and not go through a rewrite in the middle of doing it. it's not like you can't do another story about it or do a rewrite once you finish it. so... hoping to read a lot and till the end of the story.

I keep finding stories similar to the rise of house black (a lost heir returns and wants to bring House Black back to its glory days) . but I do have to admit I like Orions personality, especially what he does to Sirius. keep up the good work, I'm interested to see how this goes compared to other similar ones.

Ya son las 2 (P.M.) Me he levanta'o con el cuerpo dobla'o En el sofá del salón (Qué bien) Tengo el pijama todo destroza'o Hermano, qué follón Me falta medio pantalón Estoy como de resacón (Uf, man…) Voy a asearme, que huelo a bulldog Pero literalmente (Eyyy) Abro el agua y sale bajo cero Se ha inundado el plato de ducha entero Porque está el desagüe lleno de pelos Esto es deprimеnte (Meh) Me sacudo, sеco y como nuevo De desayuno, un buen tazón me lleno De pienso "Última" con Kellogs Porque yo soy un hombre lobo Cuando hay luna llena, voy YOLO La veo shiny y esto loco Si hiciera caso a mis instintos Tendría que salir a comerme a esos mofos Menos mal que yo me controlo Y me quedo en casita solo Escuchando beats de lo-fi pa' dormir Y cenándome un glovo

while the the writing in the beginning of the story could be better I do like where the story is going very creative I don't see a lot of on this site

Really Great Story ☺️ hope author can keep it up and doesn't drop it! it is well written and grammar is good too! The only thing I don't like about it is that ROB can fuck it up at any moment he can kill anybody he knows or loves I know it's stupid but I don't just don't like any other entity playing with MC of a story I like..

I really like your story, I dont know of any "plot holes" that you mentioned, however I really was not dissecting your story looking for mistakes, just looking for a good Harry Potter story fanfic. so I really like your story so far keep up the good work. also please continue the story until completion I really hate uncompleted works, finish your project you started please. so many disappointing unfinished fanfic. so if you could make a long completed story that would be awesome, lol. Keep up the good work. remember haters are going to hate its everywhere and a fact of life.

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the only thing I can say about this fic is the sudden jump of 5 years nothing else is all in good ten the story progresses well on the way greetings to the author

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Hello there kandepi2. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

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support Author . . . good story . . . stable update . . . little OP, but this is fanfic, so far so good a bit NTR there . . . (is that Author dream ?) hope this story have good ending. God bless u all

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