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not really used to giving reviews before 20th chapter... but I'm in a mood for it. as something that could be improved, it would be the spacing between some dialogues on some chapters. for the story so far...quite good as it makes sense. tho I still consider this as an AU after the MC came to be. And the canon would only be for the background info before the MC existed. Since everything changed when he existed on that timeline. Not much of a complain from me since I still wish that someone would finish their HP fanfic and not go through a rewrite in the middle of doing it. it's not like you can't do another story about it or do a rewrite once you finish it. so... hoping to read a lot and till the end of the story.