I'm not going to lie, at first I thought it was silly, there were a lot of grammatical errors, but as I've been a (male) reader for 3 years I learned to judge not by grammar but by story, so after I started reading this I realized that it was great, the story, the plot, the development among other aspects;
One thing I hate is Mc's forced interaction with female characters.
A word of advice: NEVER JUDGE A ROMANCE BY THE GRAMMAR, THE GRAMMAR CAN IMPROVE.