Reviews of Sacrifice: Time of Mine
Sacrifice: Time of Mine
JhiThan_Ser
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don't read the five star review ... it will make you eeast our time... the novel is a stupid one ... so far from 20 chapter I can tell this novel is not for everyone this novel is for the new readers..... old reader like us won't like it a bit... seriously a guy who has a time power still can't kill a girl....who tries to kill him.... he could just grab a thing to kill her.... any thing can kill any one as long as you know ....this logic doesn't exist in this novel.... the last not the least the MC is a book warm then how can he dont know that not killng your enemies is showing no mercy to yourself ... the author sure don't know that logic is also very important to a novel.... for does who don't like a stupid op character then dont read this.... it will sure kill your day... my is already killedπ.
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Well first off the story is horrible. First reason is that it's a harem novel, second is the mc is so childish even when he gets killed twice he still falls for people kidnapping him and saying they'll show him their house, third is the author says it's a harem(All harem novels on this site are garbage and die out) yet the character is so childish that even people who are trying to rob and ransom him wonder if he's a girl and why's he so gullible. All in all this story, just like all other harem novels, is just using the harem tag to wrangle in the teenagers of this site to read this novel while the author just adds in random girls at random times and disregards any actual real relationships and how they work out, people who are polygamous know each girl they're dating can't just come in at any time, I could go on and on about the reason harem tag labels any novel as trash and will be dropped soon but I'd rather talk about how the mc's structure is so annoying to the point where the author is just piggybacking that "He was stuck in time with no one to talk with all his life" while disregarding him dying twice and beating up 1 person and tries to act like he's gonna somehow grow up from getting killed twice and not even retaliating to the point a normal human would when he can stop time and have the ability to kill the attacker. I'm 40 chapters in only because I thought "stopping time is a cool ability and I'm bored enough to read a harem novel" but I was incorrect, the only time he uses it is when he almost dies and he does jacksh*t with it. In all of the books I've read, I'm most disappointed with this. This by far is the most useless novel I've read.
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The MC is the biggest beta i have ever seen he is killed time and time again yet at best only slaps someone even when he is tortured he still does nothing. The mc dosen't really grow over time he still remains a beta, really a pity since it seemed promising. There are other things wrong in the story like the total lack of common sense of the others or the lack of IQ
It has a very interesting and cool concept and plot, butβ¦. Most of the important things aside from the plot are poorly explained/difficult to understand. Any term that is key and repeats very often is included in that. The novel starts with mentions of βeleskβs and βelespβs which werenβt very clearly explained if they ever were. I only saw that elesk was short for elemental skill, could probably just use skill insead or donβt shorten it at the start. The Power system Iβm not a fan of. Eeh = E Dih = D Cee = C Bih = B Ey = A Es = S The rule as to how they are spelt either isnβt consistent or the accent referenced to spell them wasnβt the most widely spread. When it hasnβt been listed but you have three ranks that begin with βEβ it makes it very confusing. It is mentioned that it is alphabetic, however I shouldnβt have to say what you have written out loud a few times in order to understand what it means. I do like that it isnβt just done E -> S but not how the author did it. Yeahβ¦. makes me think that the author has E as their favourite letter or something. You then have 5 things that are repeated that all start with E and arenβt explained well. Not to mention the new existence of a rank βEybiβ ??? Whereβs the comparison for that? How people get stronger or improve hasnβt been explained well either. The only thing I remember is that people grow into a level based on their bloodline? Nothing else was really mentioned, nor was the mc actually shown asking how to improve. The MC didnβt really ask about anything regarding strength. He just started doing physical training and then technique later on. When the MC is shown to have an element via the assessment but doesnβt do the Body Strengthening that it seems everyone with an element can do it seems stupid.
