Review Detail of JhiThan_Ser in Sacrifice: Time of Mine

is this 18+ kind of harem or serious type harem or the comedy one?

Depends on how the story progresses, but at least, it doesn't focuses on them.

you have my attention sir

Keep it up and don't give up! This is a great story so far and you just need some more time to pick up FAR more readers than you currently have! I've read around 10k chapters from stories in this last year alone and I've only stumbled upon this now even when I'm looking at featured novels every day so your view count should start picking up soon! Also when will he be able to control external forces like he did in the beginning? Will he need to realize that he can reverse the time sand(or part of it?) out of his body?(and hopefully have control of it still with auto revival intact because it's his innate ability instead of the sand of time acting as a conduit due to not being trained or such) I have tons of ideas for time based applications as it is one of my favorite powers to theorize around after mater/energy vector control like accelerator from A Certain Magical Index or many other books! :)

In short if you want Ideas I'm happy to come up with some! 😁

Power using time is really complicated so he'll discover them on the way. Also, thanks! I'm an ******* so there may be chapters that seemed like filler chapters. I'm still improving so I appreciate your support :)

I don't know if this is my second reply cuz my net is unstable. I think my last reply didn't get through. But in short, thanks! I'm still an ******* so I appreciate this kind of support that will help my improvement. If you have any criticism, please do tell:)

oh, here's my first reply and why does a m a t e u r gets censored?

Sure thing! Thanks for responding! I allways liked the idea of coming up with ideas for a author so I can have some of my own creative ideas that I have come up with over years of reading purely super power/magic/cultivation/evolutionary abilities/etc. in it while not knowing how it's going to go so I can be excited to read it day after day! After all its truely amazing how many potential uses for abilities people miss out on if not outright ignore! I've not caught up to the latest chapters yet but I'm near the last 7 or so. I'm understanding as to why Conqueror is able to move by being pulled into a timeless dimension now instead of him stopping the universe in a direct manner. (Does this mean he can do it in that way when he comes up with more creative methods later? Is it due to the dust he inhaled not being his own actual power but still just an object that the scrolls didnt detect the power of and it just saw his own power and didnt even register the time law powder?) However he should be able to speed Daria up or slow her down then right? Also up to the point I have read you havent mentioned if he can still speed up celestial bodies or planets fully or the sun by twice. Then there is the question of than just 1 item at a time being affected like an allies ability is sped up while the enemy is slowed down at the same time?? The same goes for specific areas or more than one being in different time speeds as in 1 is doubled the other is halfed and others are on only slightly altered all at the same time. This may have ended a bit of a run on sentence but I'm typing on a phone allways since I prefer it to my c desktop screen when reading so it's hard to care for spacing and such properly. Anyhow thanks for reading! :)

My guess is a certain hub that has p before it.

Why is there a Tragedy tag?

Don't ask me, ask the author -jk! It is a tragedy but not that heavy. Reading thus far, should I change it or should I just remove it?

i like the thumbnail, i liked the novel name... i even like the synopsis except the last line... fighting godlike elements with mortal body by using power of time.... i mean it sounds far fetched....

author I have to ask have you given up on this book?