Reviews of An Uchiha Tale
An Uchiha Tale
Joey91991
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Really interesting story,as of the moment. Good character development and story building. The story can transpire well what is felt by Izuna in multiple circumstances. Rating as 5 to give recognition, however I normally would wait for more chapters to give a precise review.
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Your writing style is very good, but that is all. You do not know how you will develop the course of the story from the beginning. I could not bear reading a story with all these wasted potentials, especially when his partner died on his first mission, He almost does not know him, so there is no reason for him to grieve him and wake up the shringan and also his coach He talks about His talent, which there is no evidence about her, and as soon as he possesses three elements, his Teacher decides he will be stronger than Minato, but all this is a result of your lack of knowledge of the world of Naruto, the third Hokage Sarutobi has all five elements
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I like the idea of the character but people are way too easily shocked of his iq even tho what he said wasnt too impressive. You could easily add something unique with fuinjutsu or some other way. Also his relationships with other characters like itachi doesnt feel strong since its just mentioned that they trained together for sometime. You could have added some things to the previous chapters like few meaningful moments of like acts of kindness or them just enjoiyng each others company so itachi and mcs relationship would seem More meaningful. Same with Shisui and other characters as well. This might be just a personal thing but instead of lashing out on those around him he would be cold or just doesnt seem to care and gets caught up in his own mind More often. Similar to itachi in cannon but that is a character personality trait which I simply find More appealing. This tho is only my opinion. I really like the idea with mc being uchiha prodigy with Shisui and itachi but no need To Rush the plot and just More details.
