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Is nobody going to mention the 11th unknown shinigami that was incompatible with the owls ability or am I missing something. Or could it be that the mc can inherit some shinigamis abilities and is the unknown? This one is unlikely but a possibility still. Or its most likely something that will make sense only later on the story?
I doubt it, mc can probably choose which shikigami can inherit the Owls powers. Ofc I could be wrong but my impression of the author is that he wont bring stuff from the death and has no problem killing important characters suddenly. Which is something I like bc it brings the stakes up and you dont know what could happen next bc anyone might die. Of course I could be wrong there. I guess we can hope our nice author wont turn into geke 2.0.
I dont know if you have decided on the tigers ability and its likely that it wont be shown in jjk so here is few suggestions: 1. Teleport to shadows a very big radius and would work as a teleportation and quick travel. You can make it high chakra cost so its not always worth it. 2. Store certain amount of chakra which can then be gifted to the user. 3. Increasingly sharper nails. After each hit they get sharper and sharper. Same with teeth. Hopefully you can get some inspiration from this but you have been cooking recently so I have a lot of trust that it will be good.
Firstly there seems to be updates daily which is good. Has a lot of small spelling mistakes so it feels like it has been translated lazily. Other things that I find annoying is very low effort side characters. Like in the graduation chapter few chunins are asked to test Kakashi and Satoru and each of them asks Kakashi and Satoru to surrender immedietly in an arrogant way (when they have been asked to test them). This is 1 example but there are a lot more things that dont make sense in the first 10 chapters and more later on. Personally I cant read this seriously due to the amount of stuff that makes 0 sense, but if you want to read a novel where mc gets op fast you can try it.