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CristiaN

CristiaN

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Hello, my name is Cristian, this is that and that is it, don't forget that coffee is the best drink you can find, and cats are gods that came down to earth, now I stop my ramblings, have a nice day.

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  • CristiaN
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    The Sun orphanage.

    As he was gazing at the beautiful buildings, his mother is watching him with hope, and at the same time sadness in her eyes. Some minutes passed in quiet, as they were walking, one of them looked like she has an inner-fight, will the child observing his surroundings with an innocence that only a child could possess. They arrived at the location they wanted, on the front of the building it was written "L'Orphelinat du Soleil"
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  • CristiaN
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    Well, first I want to say that I enjoyed this webnovel, the theme that I think is the major one, is racism, classism and how it can bring pain, sadness to all the people who live in this kind of society. It is a very interesting theme to explore, and I want to say, to not be deceived by the cute title and cover, it tries to explore interesting themes, and I think almost all the readers will enjoy it. The main characters are enjoyable, and if you like Hachiman, you will like Miles. P.S : Have a nice day ! :)

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    It's just normal aristocracy though.

    What the hell is wrong with this city?! So they're separating the pitiful and the blessed, I assume?! That's next-level human atrociousness! The level of bullshit with what I'm currently witnessing is equal to that of the Atlantic slave trade... I may have transmigrated to an extreme version of my previous world.
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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Interesting. Hmm, God's interference it seems.

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Tsk, now he can see that he wasn't a a depressive corporative ;)

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Sometimes you need to sacrifice for something, be it to live comfortably in the future, for your family etc, you are sacrificing in present to gain something in future, and this is an equivalent exchance

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    If there exists a society there will be backstabbing, walk on corpses, killing the future of people, rich and poor, nobility and peasants. Anyway, without society, we will be still in the tribal era.

    Ch 10 The City of Midway
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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Revenge, sweet revenge i guess ;)

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Did you want to say your bag? Or it was intentional? Just to be sure, I will explain the difference in how it works. You are it shows how are you for example "You are a demon | you're a devil" But your it shows the possession of an object that you possess, like here "Miles your bag" or "Imp, your tail is huge." Hope it makes sense

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  • CristiaN
    CristiaN22d
    Commented

    Source : trust me bro, I got it from good sources ;)

    "Trust me."
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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Interesting, a good mystery, probably the main character will be motivated to search for them, and they will be important later in the story, I guess.

    Ch 7 A Tale From Another World
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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Hmm, I am curious about something, so you meant that without the necessary skills he built it in poor quality, so that means if he had talked with more people. meet more, not all humans are bad, and not all are good, so in the end, he will have found kind people?

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Isolation creates innocence, that creates naivety, that makes you a weak prey in society, will being naive, is something that some people found cute, it can doom your life.

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Hey, some people like older models. ;)

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Eh, you forgot the uppercase.

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Well, I start to enjoy reading it, the last part was cliche though, but it doesn't matter if it is a cliche, if you know how to use them, in creative ways :)

    Ch 5 Beyond the Door
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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    if all the humans were perfect, good, and kind, with respecting laws and helping between them, we will never have evolved past a point, we will have been happy with stagnation, and I think what makes the humans beautiful is their imperfections, a perfect being will be new and curios for some months, but after you saw all it knows and can do, it will become boring. Humans on the other part you could take your entire life and never learn all of what a single human thinks, want to do, and what makes a human, what makes him that specific human, and I find this interesting.

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    Should they let him die?

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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    He hadn't gone past his family's death, he only delusions himself, it seems.

    Ch 4 Rice and Noodles
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  • CristiaN
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    Commented

    Though he is doing his job, will he feel sadness if he was in that person's place and do this to another person? The man is doing his job, and we all can't spend all of our energy on strangers.

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