Reviews of Human: The Worst Kind of Demons

This is a very nice piece of work. The way you narrate things and your amazing descriptions really hooked me into this book from the start. The plot is also interesting and your characters are well designed. Well done!

I know you've been leaving comments on my work so I came to check the new story out. I like this very much. A healthy dose of comedy and a very intriguing female character. Looking forward to discover more about the male character in the coming chapters. The dual narrative setting is also quite fun. Well done.

I think the four chapters where a bit out of order. I personally would have switched chapter 3 with chapter 1, since I feel it's more the Magi's story. I feel like all this needs is a second draft, and some character sheet writing to make the cool idea for the plot shine.