Review Detail of EmpRabbit in Human: The Worst Kind of Demons

Item: Human: The Worst Kind of Demons
Rating: 5

Review detail

EmpRabbitLv133yrEmpRabbit

This is a very nice piece of work. The way you narrate things and your amazing descriptions really hooked me into this book from the start. The plot is also interesting and your characters are well designed. Well done!

Human: The Worst Kind of Demons

Toobo

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TooboAuthorToobo

Thanks for the review. I’m very flattered by your praise for my descriptive writing because my writing is actually devoid of visual description of any object or environment, so it’s a first for me! XD

3yr

EmpRabbitLv13EmpRabbit

I did not mean descriptions of objects, I meant descriptions of the situation, of the actions, that's why I said the way you narrate things.

Toobo:Thanks for the review. I’m very flattered by your praise for my descriptive writing because my writing is actually devoid of visual description of any object or environment, so it’s a first for me! XD

3yr

EmpRabbitLv13EmpRabbit

I can't copy paste from the book but an example of what I meant is paragraph 3.

Toobo:Thanks for the review. I’m very flattered by your praise for my descriptive writing because my writing is actually devoid of visual description of any object or environment, so it’s a first for me! XD

3yr

TooboAuthorToobo

Wow thanks! Sorry I was a bit dumb founded by your comments honestly, because my writing style has always lacked visual descriptions for which I have been criticised constantly. I’m grafeful that you poInted out the focus on narrations because thats what i always put focus on writing - character’s internal thoughts and feelIngs. Thanks again!

3yr