IzannahFrame
Finally another werewolf teen romance series. To be honest despite what the "Mainstream Memelords" of the internet say, I didn't find Twilight too bad. If you count all the other werewolf/vampire teen romance out there, then it was quite good if not average. This novel follows a similar 'feel' but the plot is totally differently. Well, there is revenge for one thing. So ya, 5 stars mate.
This takes me back to when I repeatedly watching Twilight and Underworld. Those were the start of fanfictions and ideas of stories regarding werewolves and vampires. and it is magnificent to still see that everyone can still harbor more premises from those movies. No wonder this story was in the silver tier. It has potential and needed more audience + exposure. And I hope that you'd get that~ Gambare, Author~~
What to say about this book? It's just so full of emotions! Readers get to vividly feel the what Melisca, the FL goes through! I liked how Melisca's character has moments of weakness and turbulence, despite being quite powerful. This makes her character all the more realistic and wholesome. The plot is fast paced and action lovers would really enjoy it, as the prologue begins right smack dab amidst action. Gonna be honest here...Initially I came for RS, but got completely hooked by the exciting plot! Wonderful job done, author![img=recommend][img=update]
The way you have written your story is extremely intriguing. The language you have chosen is showing the reader what's happening, rather than just telling. Based on experience, I can tell you it is something a lot of writers struggle with. So bravo your on the right track! One small suggestion would be try not to use "ly" ending verbs back to back in paragraphs. I feel like that is just going to enhance your writing. It is a just suggestion :) Yours story is really!
HEYYY AUTHOR, lets begin with the amazingly emotive prologue youve written, beautifully structured novel, i wouldnt be surprised if it were to be published into paper hehe. Not gonna give spoilers as i havent finished reading all chapters myself, willing to read super super SOOOOOPERRRR SOOOOOOONN !
This was an interesting read. Obviously, it deals with romance, and of the supernatural kind too, so for those who don't like it it may not be worth the read. however, I still urge one to give it a chance for at least 5 chapters as this is not like any other romance novel. The characters actually have personalities which are not only likable but also not perfect to invite no character development. I'm also very interested to see where the whole werewolf genre goes! Good luck to the author!
I have actually stopped reading books about wolf/werewolf ever since I stumbled into one depressing series years ago... However, the synopsis from this one looked good and I decided to give it a shot. I'm glad I did. I read this up to chapter 20. The story was very well written and very easy to get into. I love the fluid dialogues between the characters. It was one of the reasons that got me hooked to read more. The pace was great. There was a bit of a thrilling scene, a bit of mystery, and some hint of ***iness. Author, I'm hoping that there will be more ***iness soon.